my ffx box.. front only this time, i MIGHT make back, don't know for sure,.
Credit to E_G for template.
to answer your question,no; i'm not submitting temp or pm-ing it ^^.
Comments and +fav appreciated[d0h]
Thanks chibi. ^^ i searched my -beep- off for this art.
and why the 4.5/5? what's to improve.
[ sorry to be an ass, but i just want t improve myself over and over etc.] ;)
something besides white?
well. i wanted to make this look as simple as possible though... i know it's a ntsc Temp, but that doesn't mean it must be over-full,right?
Well the logo should be low, or otherwise,
it'd be covering the characters faces. Maybe you could make the background a different color so it would fit in? And the NTSC U/C designation doesn't look so well. I'll pm you one if you would like.
ok, updated with back.. hope you guys like it though. o.o'
i've tried to keep it as simple as possible, but my boxart-back-skills lack i think.
comments utterly appreciated.
#21, rofl yeah, me knows.
but i thought it'd sound good since FFx is all about fighting sin.
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final update, i'm done updating,
yes
do NOT expect more updates!!!
Okay. I'm expecting another update. Lol. First, the slogan sounds a bit worse now. The font on the game's story isn't fixed. Use a slogan like this. "Only a select few may be able to save the world" And you still need to fix that font. Yes, including the ones below the screenshots. Also, it would be better if you let the Chocobo's beak overlap the screenshot.
my ffx box.. front only this time, i MIGHT make back, don't know for sure,.
Credit to E_G for template.
to answer your question,no; i'm not submitting temp or pm-ing it ^^.
Comments and +fav appreciated[d0h]
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Wow Ayron! Very good! I like it! For others who don't wanna comment, be a good person. Not an ass. Nice job btw. 4.5/5
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Thanks chibi. ^^ i searched my -beep- off for this art.
and why the 4.5/5? what's to improve.
[ sorry to be an ass, but i just want t improve myself over and over etc.] ;)
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#3, I think there should be something besides white in the background.. That's why i agree with Chibi in giving you a 4.5
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something besides white?
well. i wanted to make this look as simple as possible though... i know it's a ntsc Temp, but that doesn't mean it must be over-full,right?
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very nice indeed, i like it a lot, but the logo is a bit too low. but still great. 4.5/5
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I really like this, and great artwork too.
I'd honestly suggest that push lulu a bit more to the left, and use that yellow color in the BG (at the bottom) even in the white areas.
Bump up the FFX logo a bit higher, and viola this is gonna be near-perfect!
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I like it, but I recommend that you change the positioning and sizes of the logos in accordance to your design, so things aren't so close together.
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Well the logo should be low, or otherwise,
it'd be covering the characters faces. Maybe you could make the background a different color so it would fit in? And the NTSC U/C designation doesn't look so well. I'll pm you one if you would like.
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I never knew Yuna had two different coloured eyes!
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as you can see, i've updated according to first 3 or so comments,
so expect another update for the last couple comments soon!
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Another update! hope you like it, and thanks for the comments!
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Yup! I like this version a bit better now.
Tint is the way to go! Lol
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#13, rofl, thanks.^^
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I like this one.
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Very nice.
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thanks guys, i'm working on a back for it.. i HOPE you guys like the back as well.
expect[another] update soon
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ok, updated with back.. hope you guys like it though. o.o'
i've tried to keep it as simple as possible, but my boxart-back-skills lack i think.
comments utterly appreciated.
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It's even more awesome. But I'm not liking the text so much. Try using a
bit more basic font.
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#19, hmm. i'll check what i can do.
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i've tried messing around with fonts, but this one was just the best.
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And the slogan "the fight begins!" isn't very good for a Final Fantasy game.
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#21, rofl yeah, me knows.
but i thought it'd sound good since FFx is all about fighting sin.
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final update, i'm done updating,
yes
do NOT expect more updates!!!
[fixed slogan]
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Okay. I'm expecting another update. Lol. First, the slogan sounds a bit worse now. The font on the game's story isn't fixed. Use a slogan like this. "Only a select few may be able to save the world" And you still need to fix that font. Yes, including the ones below the screenshots. Also, it would be better if you let the Chocobo's beak overlap the screenshot.
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roflmao.
ok than expect ONE more update.
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Oh yeah! I hope this info comes out before Ayron submits this box. It would be better if you add more red to the sides.
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#24, Please, finish your boxes before posting them / use the critiques forum.
And don't make all kinds of updates based on a few comments, be more patient.
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#26, yeah, sorry reed.
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this is pretty cool, a background would be nice though
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#28, well i don't think that would work, but thanks!
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Cool but switch tidus and yuna around
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#30, Lolz. old box bump >;P.
thanks.
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#30, Yuna is the main character of the game. You play as Tidus, but he's not the main character. If that makes sense... =/
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#32, it does.
the story evolves around yuna, but you play as tidus, who's following yuna..
anyway, yes, yuna is more important.
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#32, If yunA WAS SO Important they would have put here on the regular box cover but they put tidus. I played the game and beat it I know yall.
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#34, be happy.
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