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Made this one today tell me what you think please view in full, any feedback is appreciated.
[ Box updated on April 1st, 2018 ] [ original ]
Detroit: Become Human Box Cover Comments
Comment on AB501UT3 Z3R0's Detroit: Become Human Box Art / Cover.
not bad. and not perfect.though..
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front not my favorite , but back better
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i like the front bud , the back got 2 things that personally i would change but thats just me, the first screen shot has a arm/hand that looks like its coming from the guy on the back but twisted i would do something with that like put the right screen in the middle as that tells the story more , the middle to the left side and the hand one to the right side, and i would make the image behing the detroit logo on back straight so its inline with the text running along top,make it the same length as the text.
not sure if it would help but i would try that anyway,
maybe someone else could help more but them 2 things for me bud other than them minor things i think its a good box great job.
ps just been looking at your boxes and your very good,
dont need me telling you how to improve it lol
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I did think the same about the hand to be fair ahah. As for the detroit loo on the back i it actually parallel with the top text but the perspective might throw it off a little bit.
will update with some changes thanks for the feedback.
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Wow! I think this is fantastic!
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Tasty
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Pretty good, man
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