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nice job

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nice

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looks great, keep it up!

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Very very nice

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nice

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HOOOOOOOM. I LIKE THIS.WELL DONE

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Very Nice Man ;)

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nice dude

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I like so much

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It's a decent start, but it's riddled with problems. First and foremost the front doesn't even have the main character of the game on it. He isn't even displayed on the back except for the screen shots, it's usually a pretty good idea to make sure the protagonist of the game is at least SOMEWHERE and probably more prominently than the villain in the key art used. Second, the art used on the front and back doesn't seem to be stellar quality, would definitely look around for the higher quality versions and also fix Alex cutting off on the left side of the front, really drives home that you kinda just tossed a render on the background and messed with the colors.
There are A LOT of mistakes in the text on the back. The headline is all over the place, you should rarely ever justify type like you have it on "in your hands" and the whole layout of the 3 different phrases is just bizarre and confusing. The texture on the text seems blurry as well
As for the summary text both paragraph/run on sentences are confusing to read and full of typos. My best advice would be to just copy and paste some blurb from a website or even the official boxarts text on there. The text boxes compliment the colors nicely but seem bland/dont fit the rest of the box too well, are inconsistent with the gradients and have their share of spelling and justification issues. Everything in that middle area seems a little crowded as well.
It's not a bad start but there's a ton of errors and a lot to fix up.

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