I was excited to see this from the main page however now Im here, i am really not a fan. Sorry. The strange effect on the front cover I find very distracting, having Lara jumping about through lines... Also behind Lara you can see where you have Photoshopped the Image. with the 3 dots next to each other. Viewing in full size you can notice more cloning.
The back cover. I would say is better than you last in terms of structure but the execution of the design isnt great. The tag line and main text is too close or runnning over the edge of the design. Below "A Survivor is born" all that text seems very random, with no meaning and seems unnecessarily on the design. There is no alignment throughout the case. i feel it would have looked neater if you aligned the text below the screenshots left.
One small nitpick I have is that the front is PEGI and the back is ESRB. Not a huge problem but there are people on this site who care about the little details, just be careful next time :)
As Vince already said, I was excited to see this from the homepage, as I am with any Tomb Raider cases. But, I don't really like it. I'd give you feedback, but all I can do is echo what Vince has already said.
I was excited to see this from the main page however now Im here, i am really not a fan. Sorry. The strange effect on the front cover I find very distracting, having Lara jumping about through lines... Also behind Lara you can see where you have Photoshopped the Image. with the 3 dots next to each other. Viewing in full size you can notice more cloning.
The back cover. I would say is better than you last in terms of structure but the execution of the design isnt great. The tag line and main text is too close or runnning over the edge of the design. Below "A Survivor is born" all that text seems very random, with no meaning and seems unnecessarily on the design. There is no alignment throughout the case. i feel it would have looked neater if you aligned the text below the screenshots left.
Hope this helps for the future
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Thanks Vince next time i try my best with your tips
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nice
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GOOD JOB. YOUR SKILLS ARE IMPROVING MY FRIEND. KEEP IT UP
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new style i like it
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One small nitpick I have is that the front is PEGI and the back is ESRB. Not a huge problem but there are people on this site who care about the little details, just be careful next time :)
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OK Thanks
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good job man
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As Vince already said, I was excited to see this from the homepage, as I am with any Tomb Raider cases. But, I don't really like it. I'd give you feedback, but all I can do is echo what Vince has already said.
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Thanks
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nice
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thanks
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