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Hi there, This is my first box. i am a little nervous as i am not sure of the proper customs for posting. But I present Kingdom hearts 1.5 HD Remix. I typed in KH HD 1.5 REMIX as that's how it is on the internet, but who knoes how the logo is to be read. This si supposed to Minimally Represent both Chain of Memories and the original game. i hope I got that across right. I took the Legal info from i think jevangod's template. i am not quite sure if it was his. i apologize for that incomptenece. but yeah I hope you like it.
[ Box updated on October 5th, 2014 ] [ original ]
Kingdom Hearts HD 1.5 ReMIX Box Cover Comments
Comment on Pharaoh's Kingdom Hearts HD 1.5 ReMIX Box Art / Cover.
Very nice!
Just one thing, it's pegi12, not 18 ;)
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Thank you so much. yeah i think i will get to work on that ASAP.
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Also I would like to thank Mariolee, Ergo and aldimon for their help in the WIP forums, and I completely forgot to change the rating. I might change that in an update..
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Hm....
not bad.
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Thank you!
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Awesome!
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It looks nice, if a bit plain. My main criticisms are that the PEGI [is not the full one] and Square Enix logo [would stand out more in white instead of black and] are too low. I reckon the front's background could do with a slight contrast increase as well to make the pink brighter and the purple slightly darker.
For the back, I think it has a very nice structure, but there is too big a gap between the "adventure" and "waiting" (This is also grammatically incorrect for such an important part of the tagline and should not have an upper case W). Also, there's something nagging me about the "Everything"... it may be the colour, but I can see why you made it that way.
Also, I may have been a bit sleepy when writing the legal info so you might want to fix some of those typos like "Entertainmetn" if you plan on printing it.
May I just say again that this box has great potential but is let down by little issues that could easily be sorted out. Good job, and I hope I didn't sound too picky and annoying.
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Thanks for the crits. They were not picky at all. One day I will work on creating my own template from scratch more than the one I have already got. As for the grammar I will get that in an update soon.
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I can see the work you put into this box. It turned out really really great for a first. You created a structure for the back, which is great.
Overall this has a really magical look and looks really artistic.
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Way better than what I came up with as a first box, so good job ;)
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Fuck me, it looks fantastic! Especially for a first box, great job!
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Thank you so much everyone. Wow I never noticed that on the tag line before. Might update it soon. Sarashi I didn't know that you typed it out. Credit to you for making it. I will try and fix it soon.
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yeeeeeh . Amazing
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Is there a printable version? :(
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Nice Work
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Congratulations man well deserved.
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Congrats, Well Deserved . . .
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Way to go! :D
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Congrats bro :D
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