Good in concept, but could be better. The red and blue lighting to Cole doesn't look natural, it looks and feels tacked on. With some better blending techniques it'd look much cleaner. Your back isn't too bad, but the text is too jarring and could like nicer, lessen up the text a bit. Also, make the screenshots incorporated into the design, as opposed to a forced addition. Hope that helps a little.
Good in concept, but could be better. The red and blue lighting to Cole doesn't look natural, it looks and feels tacked on. With some better blending techniques it'd look much cleaner. Your back isn't too bad, but the text is too jarring and could like nicer, lessen up the text a bit. Also, make the screenshots incorporated into the design, as opposed to a forced addition. Hope that helps a little.
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This.
I'd also recommend going to the Newcomer's WiP in the forums and posting there first.
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