I'm sorry man, but I just don't like the overall composition of the box. The front seems a bit awkward with all the characters being shoved into the middle in order to make room for the logo, and Fi being cut off a bit at the top.
On the back, the color scheme is just a bit whack. There's the odd placement of the description being put above the heading, as well as the border just not fitting in with the rest of the box. Honestly, it comes off as Christmas lights. I thought what you did with the screens in the shield was nice and creative, but again there is some odd placement on this box.
I'm not trying to be a hater, but it's not really up to par with your previous fantastic work.:/
The front could work, but Zelda and Impa's size and positioning throw off the sense of balance. Their poses are pretty restrictive, and keeping them so close to Link, whose own pose is much more expressive, breaks the flow and looks very "copy-paste", flat. Scaling down the logo and scaling up Zelda and Impa would be productive changes, and would in turn give Fi some breathing room up top. And maybe try blending the two middle characters similarly to what you've done with Fi.
Aside from the back issues that everyone has posted about, i've got to be honest and say i love the front. It just really appeals to me. Fix the back and i'll be happy to fav.
Fantastic front, but the back is just lacking due to flaws that others have mentioned. The screens are the main, I believe - they just don't look right. I'm also just not a fan of the text, which needs to be boldened, reworked and generally improved.
Hi everyone!
I would quickly like to thank everyone who helped me out in my WIP thread. Thanks guys, I appreciate it alot.
Now, I know that I am no match for the current standard that rule Vgboxart, but I still enjoy making boxes.
Without further ado; The legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword!
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I'm sorry man, but I just don't like the overall composition of the box. The front seems a bit awkward with all the characters being shoved into the middle in order to make room for the logo, and Fi being cut off a bit at the top.
On the back, the color scheme is just a bit whack. There's the odd placement of the description being put above the heading, as well as the border just not fitting in with the rest of the box. Honestly, it comes off as Christmas lights. I thought what you did with the screens in the shield was nice and creative, but again there is some odd placement on this box.
I'm not trying to be a hater, but it's not really up to par with your previous fantastic work.:/
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Yeah, I'm gonna have to agree with Mariolee. The back has a lot of empty space and the text border doesn't fit in at all.
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The front could work, but Zelda and Impa's size and positioning throw off the sense of balance. Their poses are pretty restrictive, and keeping them so close to Link, whose own pose is much more expressive, breaks the flow and looks very "copy-paste", flat. Scaling down the logo and scaling up Zelda and Impa would be productive changes, and would in turn give Fi some breathing room up top. And maybe try blending the two middle characters similarly to what you've done with Fi.
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Aside from the back issues that everyone has posted about, i've got to be honest and say i love the front. It just really appeals to me. Fix the back and i'll be happy to fav.
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Fantastic front, but the back is just lacking due to flaws that others have mentioned. The screens are the main, I believe - they just don't look right. I'm also just not a fan of the text, which needs to be boldened, reworked and generally improved.
However, the front is still amazing.
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the front is amazing!!
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I like what you have. The back layout, specifically with the text box could have been better, but I think it's still a great box.
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#2, this.
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the presentation is too bright!
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