Not bad at all for a first. Im actually very impressed. The back is pretty good. I would suggest using a font more similar to Gears of War on the front but it doesn't look too bad. Also try using a simple font for the description because it always looks more professional rather than the bold. And then the front looks unfinished. I would do more to it to make it look more complete because right now you have 3 renders that are kind of just...floating there if you know what I mean. But it is very good for a first, you have a great start here.
Looks Great but here are somethings you might want to improve:
-the bottom left corner of the front is a bit plain and I am not a big fan of the front in general
-The back looks amazing, the text is in the perfect place and the font looks great my only complaint for the back is that the screens could use some borders
And finally welcome to the site its great to see a new member that puts effort into their boxes.
Comments are welcome :)
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Awesome, FAV!
Edited at 1 decade ago
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Not bad at all for a first. Im actually very impressed. The back is pretty good. I would suggest using a font more similar to Gears of War on the front but it doesn't look too bad. Also try using a simple font for the description because it always looks more professional rather than the bold. And then the front looks unfinished. I would do more to it to make it look more complete because right now you have 3 renders that are kind of just...floating there if you know what I mean. But it is very good for a first, you have a great start here.
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Looks Great but here are somethings you might want to improve:
-the bottom left corner of the front is a bit plain and I am not a big fan of the front in general
-The back looks amazing, the text is in the perfect place and the font looks great my only complaint for the back is that the screens could use some borders
And finally welcome to the site its great to see a new member that puts effort into their boxes.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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Awesome first!
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Thanks everyone :D
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