Well a new box :D
this time around i tried to go with a simple look at one of my first fighters: Dead or Alive
hope you like it
(I got all the photos from google)
enjoy!~
~biohazardbox7~
It's kind of interesting. The logo is unreadable (You also misspelled "Extreme.") and the style of the photographic ocean and the anime girls kind of clash.
You have this realistic sunset beach background with two anime girls fighting above it, like Slyder said, the styles of the two clash. And, because of the color scheme, the way you faded them makes it hard to see them IMO. And then theres the logo, which is misspelled. I think you should ditch that style logo. Granted, it looks good, but I don't think it fits well with the style of the box. When you're making a more empty box like this, try to give it a simpler logo. Not to simple, like white text, but just give some design to it at the same time. And the back is probably the worst part of the box IMO, there is absolutely nothing to look at except her and the beach. Maybe at some tagline to it?
I like it, but I think you were trying to hard to make this a simple box. This really can be good, but you just need to try again.
Well a new box :D
this time around i tried to go with a simple look at one of my first fighters: Dead or Alive
hope you like it
(I got all the photos from google)
enjoy!~
~biohazardbox7~
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I have mixed feelings over that logo but otherwise, it looks good!
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It's kind of interesting. The logo is unreadable (You also misspelled "Extreme.") and the style of the photographic ocean and the anime girls kind of clash.
I kind of like it, though.
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#3, so I'm guessing, make a new logo and not mispell anything?
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Sorry bro, I'm not feeling it.
You have this realistic sunset beach background with two anime girls fighting above it, like Slyder said, the styles of the two clash. And, because of the color scheme, the way you faded them makes it hard to see them IMO. And then theres the logo, which is misspelled. I think you should ditch that style logo. Granted, it looks good, but I don't think it fits well with the style of the box. When you're making a more empty box like this, try to give it a simpler logo. Not to simple, like white text, but just give some design to it at the same time. And the back is probably the worst part of the box IMO, there is absolutely nothing to look at except her and the beach. Maybe at some tagline to it?
I like it, but I think you were trying to hard to make this a simple box. This really can be good, but you just need to try again.
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#5, I appreciate your long and thoughtful breakdown
any ideas for a background besides a beach?
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