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The game from a completely subjective view. Because when I played it, the broom was VERY often in action! :D
It's kinda good, a bit more interleaf/line spacing on the back's text would be useful though, as well as some more tracking. You do have enough space - make the blood a bit smaller and give the text a more room. Makes it a lot more pleasing for the eyes.
The blood behind on the back makes the legal stuff hard to read. Try to add outlines or a transparent box behind it, if you wanna keep the blood behind the text.
The slipcase... It's a nice touch to have a deep red slipcase and a white package inside, but the logo could stand out a bit more.
Suggestion: How about removing the bat and put the broom in his hand instead? could help with the text, because you were able to remove the big broom on the left.
Solid update! It fixes almost everything I didn't like about the first version. My only gripe now is that I think the regular green plastic frame would look better. Fav'd.
way better, but the gaps in your text (like in the second line of the copy on the back)... :/ If you manage to fix your problems with typography you sure will get one of the better ones here.
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The game from a completely subjective view. Because when I played it, the broom was VERY often in action! :D
The slipcase is just a gimmick...
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It's kinda good, a bit more interleaf/line spacing on the back's text would be useful though, as well as some more tracking. You do have enough space - make the blood a bit smaller and give the text a more room. Makes it a lot more pleasing for the eyes.
The blood behind on the back makes the legal stuff hard to read. Try to add outlines or a transparent box behind it, if you wanna keep the blood behind the text.
The slipcase... It's a nice touch to have a deep red slipcase and a white package inside, but the logo could stand out a bit more.
Suggestion: How about removing the bat and put the broom in his hand instead? could help with the text, because you were able to remove the big broom on the left.
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UPDATE!
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Solid update! It fixes almost everything I didn't like about the first version. My only gripe now is that I think the regular green plastic frame would look better. Fav'd.
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way better, but the gaps in your text (like in the second line of the copy on the back)... :/ If you manage to fix your problems with typography you sure will get one of the better ones here.
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PRINTABLE ADDED
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really nice and original ; )
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