You need to work on the presentation. The back and front should be side by side, not above or below each other.
Also, you could have let people give some critique in your WIP thread before uploading it.
It's definately not bad, but theres a few things that could be improved:
The background isn't very exciting and Is rather plain. It'd be better if you Got a more exciting background.
On the back the text is too big taking up too much room. You should make it smaller so there is more room for other things.
Mario and Bowser are cut off and not enough of them is shown, move them into different areas so that more of them can be seen.
Okay, so I saw this guy with an extremely cruddy cover so I decided to remake it as my own copy
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You need to work on the presentation. The back and front should be side by side, not above or below each other.
Also, you could have let people give some critique in your WIP thread before uploading it.
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Okay thank you for the criticism, I'll move it to side to side, is there anything else?
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Not bad, I like that template.
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thank you, the template is from Silent Oblivion
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It's definately not bad, but theres a few things that could be improved:
The background isn't very exciting and Is rather plain. It'd be better if you Got a more exciting background.
On the back the text is too big taking up too much room. You should make it smaller so there is more room for other things.
Mario and Bowser are cut off and not enough of them is shown, move them into different areas so that more of them can be seen.
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okay... so I'll make the text smaller and I'll see what else I can do...
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