I don't know, I guess that the fronts the best, and yuor previous box was better, but I guess it's better than others, if you put more text on the back and change the side (middle part) so that the GoW3 writing goes down sideways as usual then I might fave :)
the text on the back is not good, and the 'play as..a woman' bit seems a bit off to me, to me women kick ass better than men do in games, so maybe change that to something a bit less sexist, not that I'm calling you that it just sounds that way to me.
I laughed at the "play.. as a woman"-part on the back. Not sexist in the least but it does sound really odd. Other than improved typography and wording on the back there are ton of improvements that should be made, starting with using a regular template with correct size (there are plenty of those in the resources). The solid colors doesn't look good either and background images and textures should be applied. Among other thing.
I do know the back isn't the best..
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And if someone could help me with how to make the box, kind of floating on a separate background
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I don't know, I guess that the fronts the best, and yuor previous box was better, but I guess it's better than others, if you put more text on the back and change the side (middle part) so that the GoW3 writing goes down sideways as usual then I might fave :)
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the text on the back is not good, and the 'play as..a woman' bit seems a bit off to me, to me women kick ass better than men do in games, so maybe change that to something a bit less sexist, not that I'm calling you that it just sounds that way to me.
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I laughed at the "play.. as a woman"-part on the back. Not sexist in the least but it does sound really odd. Other than improved typography and wording on the back there are ton of improvements that should be made, starting with using a regular template with correct size (there are plenty of those in the resources). The solid colors doesn't look good either and background images and textures should be applied. Among other thing.
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