[ Box updated on April 13th, 2010 ] [ original ]
Pokemon XD Gale of Darkness DS Box Cover Comments
Comment on YoshiFan2215's Pokemon XD Gale of Darkness DS Box Art / Cover.
[ Box updated on April 13th, 2010 ] [ original ]
Comment on YoshiFan2215's Pokemon XD Gale of Darkness DS Box Art / Cover.
My first box. I am self taught so I don't know if I could have done better. Please give an honest opinion and tell me how I can do better boxes. I AM working on a back but I don't have a back to edit. (as in the image so I can add words and/or pictures)So if possible please send me it.
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Hey, welcome to VGBA! When you say you dont have a back to edit do you mean you need a template? If so you may find some here link
The logo and renders are choppy and the background doesn't match with the river.
Also, feel free to post boxes in the work in progress forums so the community can give input and give you tips.
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Hey, man. Welcome to VGBA. Good box for your first time. My first one looked like a wallpaper with logos stamped on. This is quite nice, for a first-time. I agree with rpgfreak- the image IS a tad choppy, but it is good other than that. If you are using photoshop, and are interested in a Wii template, I can send you one that I found. I don't do DS boxes, but I do like yours. Keep up the effort.
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welcome to the site!
the box is pretty good for a first the renders are a little choppy and the ESRB is small
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#3, Thank you for the constructive criticism.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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#2, Thank you a lot for the link and the constructive criticism.
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I'm happy that so many people think that my first box is pretty good.
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UPDATED. I added a back. I didn't change the size of the front because it would take me a while to completely remake it for the bigger template I have.
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UPDATED. I added a back. I didn't change the size of the front because it would take me a while to completely remake it for the bigger template I have. (On the back I used the HG/SS trainer sprite because I couldn't find a sprite for the trainer from XD)
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Umm... First of all, don't clutter the comments with your own...
Second, I suggest shrinking the back at least a little bit, so it doesn't look that bulky and bad. I'll be checking up for updates periodically. Find a good, 2-d temp to start with, man.
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Very good first box! 4/5 +fav
But there are a few problems, the ESRB logo on the front is really small, Shadow Lugia on the front is choppy, need screen borders, thats pretty much it! Like I said good first box!
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Not bad for your first! I would suggest adding thicker borders on the screenshots, and add some slight colour difference. Also, if you're pasting the ERSB logo on and resizing it, I recommend you get some good box refences to verify the size.
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I am working on a new front.
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Updated with the new front I made. I don't know if you guys will like it more, but I made Lugia less choppy and made a better background.
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#14, Front is better, remember back needs improvement
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#15 I'm working to be better, and I think the front is much better than before. I will be at some point making a new back.
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This actually pretty good. The back DOES need some work, but I'll fave.
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this is really great for a first box 5/5
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I'm glad to see this box is coming along nicely.
And y'know, I've recently picked up my old copies of Pkmn Blue and Yellow! lol I just thought that was kinda funny.
+fave.
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