The point of the WIP forum is to get people's help while you're working on your box. The WIP forum isn't just for showing a preview of your box before you post it.
Things you should address in this box:
1. The ESRB and Nintendo logo should be moved up and in a little bit.
2. You should stick with 1 art style for your renders. (You have 4 different Yoshis from 3 different games, and because of that they all have slightly different art styles.)
3. You have floating renders. (3 of your renders are on the ground, but don't look like they are. To fix this problem you need to give them a shadow underneath them.)
4. Find a background that works with your renders. (This is a real life picture with computer generated characters overtop of it. The art styles should match)
#4, Feel free to apply those tips to all the boxes you make. They provide a very general guideline for what makes a box work.
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My first non-Sonic box.
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Different color Yoshi's:Me
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i will fav it
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The point of the WIP forum is to get people's help while you're working on your box. The WIP forum isn't just for showing a preview of your box before you post it.
Things you should address in this box:
1. The ESRB and Nintendo logo should be moved up and in a little bit.
2. You should stick with 1 art style for your renders. (You have 4 different Yoshis from 3 different games, and because of that they all have slightly different art styles.)
3. You have floating renders. (3 of your renders are on the ground, but don't look like they are. To fix this problem you need to give them a shadow underneath them.)
4. Find a background that works with your renders. (This is a real life picture with computer generated characters overtop of it. The art styles should match)
#4, Feel free to apply those tips to all the boxes you make. They provide a very general guideline for what makes a box work.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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#3,Thanks for those helpful tips. I'm not that good with Mario boxes.
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Haha I still remember that temp for the old Wii boxarts =P.
Not too bad, the yoshi's feel out of place and a new background would be nice too. I give it a 3/5 for now.
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CG+ real life BG =fail
Edited at 1 decade ago
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