Ok. I uploaded this again and did some of the changes you guys were talking about yesterday. Even though you all did give me a bunch of favs ive been trying to concentrate on more of the corrections instead of just getting favs. So I took out the words from underneath the logo. To tell you the truth i actually like it more as well.
The smaller text is way better, however you are mixing way too much styles here. You use fonts with and without serifs (is this the plural of "serif"?) for your copy and you mix the alignment way too often as well (right, left, centered). You should find a clear line for the whole copy text.
#25, Yea. Cause I figure that this game they would bring back alot of people from the old and newer games. Since Link is grown up he would have to use the things and people in the past to help him in the future.
Really good, I like teh use of colours and the acrylis style you used on the background, gives the thing a nice atmosphere, the only thing that bugs me is the picture of Link and Midna, it just looks out of place as if Midna was just rushed into the picture. Other than that everything else strikes every tick box.
Love the front, sadly the back is kind of a setback with all the text jumping around and it's kind of hard to read. But I still love it, and it will go in my fav's. And if you could, the Gary's Mod pics are very nice ones, and a few I think would fit this box ;)
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#2, Yeah I think it turned out better too, all of the changes really helped (Not that it wasn't already amazing lol). Incredible job!
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Ok. I uploaded this again and did some of the changes you guys were talking about yesterday. Even though you all did give me a bunch of favs ive been trying to concentrate on more of the corrections instead of just getting favs. So I took out the words from underneath the logo. To tell you the truth i actually like it more as well.
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Love the style you used on this. The blue fits the box good. Maybe you should make the tagline easier to see though.
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Glad you did that Jevangod. This box is extremely impressive.
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The legend of color balance/hue&saturation.
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This box is good dude, but there's something about it that makes it look like a lot of over boxes I've seen.
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I lol'd at the 3rd screen on the back
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#5, Ohhh so thats the crap you were talking about on my last Legend of Zelda box.
#3, updated and changed the tagline.
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Ok, the design is great but some text is messed up. I'd Revise the entire plot summary again, and polish up the 3rd screen on the back.
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#9, Yea. I told everyone I hate writing my own plot. But the third screen ill fix that in a quick sec.
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This would've been cool, but the text honestly ruined everything for me. Theres too much AND it's too big
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Awesome box, cant wait for this game!
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Not bad, but the makeup of the text is a step back on this one.
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nice
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So what should I do with the text?
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You are the Wii master.
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#16, LOL, thank you.
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#8, Excuse me?
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#18, You know. Not being nice and all.
"Jevangod, I may not have always been as nice as should be to you."
And I said I never really noticed. Until now actually. But I found the comment quite funny though. So dont worry about it.
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Um... at least Master Works worthy.
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#20, Dont know about that. Either HOF or close to hof is my prediction.
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#21, Okay, I just think its perfect.
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The smaller text is way better, however you are mixing way too much styles here. You use fonts with and without serifs (is this the plural of "serif"?) for your copy and you mix the alignment way too often as well (right, left, centered). You should find a clear line for the whole copy text.
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#23, Ohhh ok. I see what your talking about. Ill see if I can clean it up a bit more. Yea I agree with you. The smaller text does seem better.
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I really like that last screenshot with Midna returning.
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#25, Yea. Cause I figure that this game they would bring back alot of people from the old and newer games. Since Link is grown up he would have to use the things and people in the past to help him in the future.
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This is really awesome dude, but I think you should have used different screenshots for the back. Perhaps, some of these ones?
link
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#27, Thanks.
What are those images from? Is that the new game?
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Damn! This is a great box! 5/5
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#28, it's Gary's Mod
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#30, Ohh. Well he did a good job with it.
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wow that is amazing dude.well done 10/10 i would give it
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How have i not faved this yet ?
Nice box.
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Really good, I like teh use of colours and the acrylis style you used on the background, gives the thing a nice atmosphere, the only thing that bugs me is the picture of Link and Midna, it just looks out of place as if Midna was just rushed into the picture. Other than that everything else strikes every tick box.
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Nintendo should make this the real boxart O.O
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Love the front, sadly the back is kind of a setback with all the text jumping around and it's kind of hard to read. But I still love it, and it will go in my fav's. And if you could, the Gary's Mod pics are very nice ones, and a few I think would fit this box ;)
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