Credit to:
Temp - Jevangod (editied slightly)
Pokemon renders - Google images & Planet Renders
Mario render - Del337er
Yoshi renders - link
Light blue Yoshi - Adhiboy
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Damn Seth you beat me :P First time Ever! Lol... and yeah it was :)
Posting multiple mediocre boxes on the same spread does not an awesome design make. Most bundles like this are just pointless attempts to compensate for bad design. Try spending more time on your actual boxes and less time on copying Mad_Spike next time.
#7, We have tried out best here Koopa, and it took us a lot of time for each box, maybe about 2-3hours, maybe more, bu I appreciate the coment and will take into account for next time.
#8, His presentation is very similar, although his has glass. It's not brutal, its an opinion, and thats what we made the boxes for opinions, so we can make them better.
#8, You copied his presentation, The disk cylinder thing that the boxes are on, that was his idea. As for the box, I have to agree with KoopaDasher, and del337er, honestly I don't think that it is right of you to fav this box, seeing that it is partially yours.
#11, Yes I know, he even faved his collab with me, but I told him to un fav it. Think about you can't fav your own boxes so why should you be able to fav your collabs.
#12, That idea is based of of Mad Spike's have you seen any of his presentations, they all are like that, either way you either stole GrahamZ's presentation or Mad Spike's
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A presentation is simply that, a presentation. There are no rules as to whom to credit when you make a presentation design similar to there's. I created my presentation from scratch, i did not steal anyone else's presentation, i simply borrowed an idea.
I think you should be able to fav your collabs, because it isnt giving you any credit, you are getting no "fav points" for it, nor getting any closer to your next rank. You are just faving a friends box.
#14, You know I am not going to argue with you but, think about it, the same principals apply to collabs that do with your own work. You don't fav your own do you? No you don't why? Because YOU made it. Who cares if you don't get enough credit other than you name being on the box, being on the presentation, being on the first comment. Just the principal.
As for the boxes, each seems to have the same general layout. The only some what good box was/is the Mario one. The backs are mediocre to say the least. The look boring and plain, sorry but its the truth. Try spending more time on a single box, rather than multiple.
Okay I loved the idea ... I clicked it right away.
The mario box I love the screenshot layout but the open space above it really brings it down. The clouds with the writing was a good idea just I felt like it was plopped there to cover space. the front was nice and simple but, the mario art is creeping me out. =]
Yoshi box was played safe. I don't think the back has any style ...it doesnt even have a simplistic feel either. The front had the right idea but the yellow back really changed my mind about it.
Pokemon box was my fav. the front was nice for a wii box, spot on. the back was well done but I dont like the white type. The tagline could of been done with a more brought out style too.
#15 Well, i see what you mean. Thank you for the advice. And i will use it if we ever collab again, one box, more time.
#16 Wow thank you for that critique. I can see what all of you mean, with the boxes being to simple and bland. Next time, we will do one box, and put alot more work and effort into it. (Yea those eyes on mario are a little creepy :P)
I apologize for stealing/borrowing the presentation i used, even though i still do not agree with Roar's opinion. Next time i will try to create something original.
I must say i like the Yoshi's Story one the best but del3773er, i can really see the effort put in your hand drawn one. The last one's artwork im not a huge fan of but i understand that its the only artwork you could use. On account of the effort and 2 first boxes, i fav.
Damn this is a nice box, oh wait i helped make this :P
Nice job Reece, that was fun ;)
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Ok this is my collab with the great del337er, we've been working on this for about 2 to 3 days now and time difference hasnt been an issue, surprisingly. We tried to keep the style like a 2D kind of feel, I hope that it worked. I made the Yoshi's Story box, del377er made the Super Mario 64 box, everythng on the front was hand drawn by him. We both contributed to the Pokémon Stadium. I made the bundle box and del337er made the presentation. This was a team effort, both adding to eachothers boxes and helping eachother out, and ill be looking forward to collaborating with him in the future :)
Credit to:
Temp - Jevangod (editied slightly)
Pokemon renders - Google images & Planet Renders
Mario render - Del337er
Yoshi renders - link
Light blue Yoshi - Adhiboy
EDIT
Damn Seth you beat me :P First time Ever! Lol... and yeah it was :)
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Why is it so blurry?
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#3, Try viewing in full.
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i no
lol, I just noticed I got cred. Your welcome
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Sorry about the blurriness, its just that we had to compress to JPG cuz it was so big
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Posting multiple mediocre boxes on the same spread does not an awesome design make. Most bundles like this are just pointless attempts to compensate for bad design. Try spending more time on your actual boxes and less time on copying Mad_Spike next time.
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#7 Brutal...how did we copy Mad_Spike at all?
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#7, We have tried out best here Koopa, and it took us a lot of time for each box, maybe about 2-3hours, maybe more, bu I appreciate the coment and will take into account for next time.
#8, His presentation is very similar, although his has glass. It's not brutal, its an opinion, and thats what we made the boxes for opinions, so we can make them better.
Update
Added reflection below the bundle box
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#8, You copied his presentation, The disk cylinder thing that the boxes are on, that was his idea. As for the box, I have to agree with KoopaDasher, and del337er, honestly I don't think that it is right of you to fav this box, seeing that it is partially yours.
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#10, Spypilot fav'd his March of the minis box. link
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#10 No i didnt...i used Grahamz's idea: link The actual "cylinder" presentation, is widely used.
#11 i was about to point that out, look at comment 8 of that link
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#11, Yes I know, he even faved his collab with me, but I told him to un fav it. Think about you can't fav your own boxes so why should you be able to fav your collabs.
#12, That idea is based of of Mad Spike's have you seen any of his presentations, they all are like that, either way you either stole GrahamZ's presentation or Mad Spike's
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A presentation is simply that, a presentation. There are no rules as to whom to credit when you make a presentation design similar to there's. I created my presentation from scratch, i did not steal anyone else's presentation, i simply borrowed an idea.
I think you should be able to fav your collabs, because it isnt giving you any credit, you are getting no "fav points" for it, nor getting any closer to your next rank. You are just faving a friends box.
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#14, You know I am not going to argue with you but, think about it, the same principals apply to collabs that do with your own work. You don't fav your own do you? No you don't why? Because YOU made it. Who cares if you don't get enough credit other than you name being on the box, being on the presentation, being on the first comment. Just the principal.
As for the boxes, each seems to have the same general layout. The only some what good box was/is the Mario one. The backs are mediocre to say the least. The look boring and plain, sorry but its the truth. Try spending more time on a single box, rather than multiple.
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Okay I loved the idea ... I clicked it right away.
The mario box I love the screenshot layout but the open space above it really brings it down. The clouds with the writing was a good idea just I felt like it was plopped there to cover space. the front was nice and simple but, the mario art is creeping me out. =]
Yoshi box was played safe. I don't think the back has any style ...it doesnt even have a simplistic feel either. The front had the right idea but the yellow back really changed my mind about it.
Pokemon box was my fav. the front was nice for a wii box, spot on. the back was well done but I dont like the white type. The tagline could of been done with a more brought out style too.
nice work either way
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#15, #16, Thanks for the comments guys and if del337er is ok with it we can still work on it and update it soon.
And apologies to GrahamZ if he has seen this, credit to him for inspiring the presentation.
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#15 Well, i see what you mean. Thank you for the advice. And i will use it if we ever collab again, one box, more time.
#16 Wow thank you for that critique. I can see what all of you mean, with the boxes being to simple and bland. Next time, we will do one box, and put alot more work and effort into it. (Yea those eyes on mario are a little creepy :P)
I apologize for stealing/borrowing the presentation i used, even though i still do not agree with Roar's opinion. Next time i will try to create something original.
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I must say i like the Yoshi's Story one the best but del3773er, i can really see the effort put in your hand drawn one. The last one's artwork im not a huge fan of but i understand that its the only artwork you could use. On account of the effort and 2 first boxes, i fav.
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#19 Thank you
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#19, I dont see the fav :(
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lol
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I'll fav for the effort that is put on this
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#21, Oops, sorry i forgot, there you go. :)
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