It's a little random (the mushrooms you chose, FLUDD, and the background), the back looks kinda cool but everything is overlapping one another and IMO Bowser JR. should be brought down a little so it looks like he's behind Bowser in the background more.
Also, maybe you should try changing the title a bit, instead of putting "and" maybe put something a little more convoluted and/or cliche' like "Journey for the Five Mushrooms" xP
i think this came out pretty good not my best but pretty good im sorry my computer wouldn't let me add a side title
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It's a little random (the mushrooms you chose, FLUDD, and the background), the back looks kinda cool but everything is overlapping one another and IMO Bowser JR. should be brought down a little so it looks like he's behind Bowser in the background more.
Also, maybe you should try changing the title a bit, instead of putting "and" maybe put something a little more convoluted and/or cliche' like "Journey for the Five Mushrooms" xP
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#2, i updated it but it kinda became a little wierd
Edited at 1 decade ago
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#3, there i took a while and i had to try it 3 more times but it finally came out right
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You really need to work on your grammer! The captalazation is wrong. However I see a lot of potentail in this box :)!
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you need a better program, man. i'd be makin ones twice as worse if I wasn't using link
click on the link to the right there... you're welcome, man.
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