I was playing Paper Mario 64 on the Virtual Console, and saw these guys, and I thought that they looked a lot like the ninja turtles. So, I made this box. Jevangod made the temp, I rendered and recoloured all of the pics that needed recolouring/rendering.
I love the editing on the koopas, but the bac could use some work. The shells don't look like they're on the ground. And I think you should use another background on the back. I know the RPG Maker cewar backgrop is cool, but there's other images to use.
#2 They are mutants... they are meant to look disgusting.
You should change the colour scheme around because the strong green-theme makes little sense.
I like the idea as well, but I agree with #2 about the logo / Koopa color. The front could stand to be more dynamic, with some effects or something, becasue it's a little to calm as it is now. The back looks ok to me as is for the most part, with the exception of the typo in the description text.
Oh my god! I woke up with a fav from KoopaDasher, my FAVOURITE artist on this site *faints*
#6, I tried, and they looked terrible. Does anyone have a decent tutorial on how to shadow?
#7, Yeah, you picked up where the bg are from. I couldn't find a better one.
#8, OK. I think I will change it to yellow.
#9, Thanks!
#10, Yeah, I normally do an epic fail on screenshots ;)
#11, Nice, Thanks :p
#12, What's the typo? I can't find it lol
#13, Thanks a ton!
#15, Thanks!
#16, Wow! AWESOMENESS! Go Koopa! Also, That's where I got the idea from. When I was younger, when I played Paper mario, I thought that was what they were actually called XD
P.S. One more fav and this becomes my most faved box!
Glad I could help? Seriously... it's a box about Koopas. I almost have to fave it, but the editing on the Koopas is cool, so I'll give it to you anyway.
On the front it looks like you flipped the background upside down, it's really noticeable since the perspective is leading backwards. I'd suggest doing something to fix that, also the back is really text heavy.
A neater layout for the text(as well as smaller text) and maybe some game features to take up the space made by the smaller text would make the back look a lot better.
Not to sound mean but pick up almost any box from a game store and the font will be basic. Quotes and stuff can be crazy font but you don't crazy font for game description.
I was playing Paper Mario 64 on the Virtual Console, and saw these guys, and I thought that they looked a lot like the ninja turtles. So, I made this box. Jevangod made the temp, I rendered and recoloured all of the pics that needed recolouring/rendering.
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You should of either made the Koopa's skin green or made the logo yellow.
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#2, I tried making the skin green and it looked disgusting. I might update in the morning with a new logo.
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Hah Great :)
Made me smile
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#4, Thanks, that's what I was going for ;)
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haha, nice! =D
But make some shadows under the koopas and the Shells.
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I love the editing on the koopas, but the bac could use some work. The shells don't look like they're on the ground. And I think you should use another background on the back. I know the RPG Maker cewar backgrop is cool, but there's other images to use.
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#2 They are mutants... they are meant to look disgusting.
You should change the colour scheme around because the strong green-theme makes little sense.
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#8, They look awesome in the films :D
Anyway, nice idea but not executed very well.
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Thats cool, but it looks totally different in the gaming pics =S.
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Nice, cute :p
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I like the idea as well, but I agree with #2 about the logo / Koopa color. The front could stand to be more dynamic, with some effects or something, becasue it's a little to calm as it is now. The back looks ok to me as is for the most part, with the exception of the typo in the description text.
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The epicness! It- I- It's too much!!
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Hey, it doesn't look that good without shadows
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i say keep em yellow! great job man, and awesome idea!
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Awesome. Reminds me of the Koopa Bros from Paper Mario.
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Oh my god! I woke up with a fav from KoopaDasher, my FAVOURITE artist on this site *faints*
#6, I tried, and they looked terrible. Does anyone have a decent tutorial on how to shadow?
#7, Yeah, you picked up where the bg are from. I couldn't find a better one.
#8, OK. I think I will change it to yellow.
#9, Thanks!
#10, Yeah, I normally do an epic fail on screenshots ;)
#11, Nice, Thanks :p
#12, What's the typo? I can't find it lol
#13, Thanks a ton!
#15, Thanks!
#16, Wow! AWESOMENESS! Go Koopa! Also, That's where I got the idea from. When I was younger, when I played Paper mario, I thought that was what they were actually called XD
P.S. One more fav and this becomes my most faved box!
EDIT: Yay! Officially my most faved box!
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Nice box. Pretty funny concept.
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#17 I know how you feel! I remember the day VGMaster first faved one of my boxes ^_^
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#19, Its so awesome! *faints again*
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Glad I could help? Seriously... it's a box about Koopas. I almost have to fave it, but the editing on the Koopas is cool, so I'll give it to you anyway.
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#21, I'll remember that.
I HAVE AN ANNOUNCEMENT:
from now on I am only making koopa-themed boxes!
Just kidding ;)
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Heh. Nice! :)
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#23, Thanks StH!
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#17 You have it saying "The turtles have been fired and replaced my someone much more epic." Obviously it should say "by". :)
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*facepalms*
How did I not see that?
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I read it through about 10 times before uploading and I still made a typo.
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Woah, i use to be a big TMNT fan until the suckish movies came in. + Fav and Author Fav.
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On the front it looks like you flipped the background upside down, it's really noticeable since the perspective is leading backwards. I'd suggest doing something to fix that, also the back is really text heavy.
A neater layout for the text(as well as smaller text) and maybe some game features to take up the space made by the smaller text would make the back look a lot better.
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#28, Awesome! Thanks.
#29, It was meant to look like a drop (you know those drops they have in the sewers)...
I'll just try to find a new background then.
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Maybe add a sewer drain? Also, check your page.
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#2, I tried changing the colour scheme to yellow and it looks shocking. I'll keep it as it is.
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#31, I'll try to find one.
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Wow, this box has 28 faves! This might be my first hall of fame *crosses fingers and preys*
I'll fix the typo and update soon.
Edit: Updated!
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You deserve a HoF for this for sure. ^_^
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#35, Thanks PF!
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I keep on checking this to see if it's HOF. :/
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I'll fav now that the typos fixed, and you've seemed to be taking everyone's critiques into consideration which is always admirable. :)
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#37, So do I XD
#38, Thanks a heap. 3 Blue ranked people faved one box? Awesome!
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hey this is 40 points away from the hall! i hope it gets in!
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Not to sound mean but pick up almost any box from a game store and the font will be basic. Quotes and stuff can be crazy font but you don't crazy font for game description.
Over all a good creative idea =]
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#40, wow thats a lot. I'd doubt it.
#41, ok, thanks for the advice.
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#40, sorry if this sounds N00B1SH, but what do you mean by points?
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You need a certain about of points to get to the Hall, the points are the ranks so if i fav, I add three.
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#44, Exactly how many is this "certain number of points"?
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#44, Exactly how many is this "certain number of points"?
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Love it! great box i cant really see many flaws 5/5 + fav
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#47, Thanks JAYHOG!
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37 Favs and no HOF, that's not right. -_-'
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Great job!
Put shadows under the Koopas and they shells...
+Fav
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#45, 200, i think
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#49, Agreed. I'm hoping it gets there
#50, Thanks, but I don't know how XD
#51, OK, thanks
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Still not in the hall? I say 50 favs and it's in there.
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What is it with the Batman Forever font used for the blurb? :D
Nice!
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Congrats on you first Hall, tmrd!
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Congrats tmrd for your first HoF.
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OMFG! *dies*
Thanks everyone!
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Congrats on your first HOF.
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Pretty good. Backs a bit bland but all and all good job. Congrats on HoF
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congrats on your very first hall of fame!
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Congrats on your first (and hopefully not the last) Hall of Fame! =)
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Congrats on your first (and hopefully not the last) Hall of Fame, mate! =)
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#61, Thanks!
#62, Did I hear an echo? lol
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woot woot! it's really good! i mean... great! and grats on your first hall o' fame, buddy!
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#64, Thanks!
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Well done TMRD, I knew you could make it. :)
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#66, Thanks. I didn't think it would after it fell of the main page XD
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funny !
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LOL
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