My winning entry for the summer competition round 1. Credit to ADFD for the template. Not much to say on this really,wanted to do a final fantasy box and just had a little play round so here it is.
Critique and comments welcome :)
It looks like the front and back are both part of an entire background, the characters look as if they are floating in air. The Square-Enix logo appears to be squished.
#12, Yeah the front and back are supposed to be part of an entire background and as for the characters floating I tried to put them out of the template to give it more possibilities. Also, for the whole thing I was trying to go for a minimalistic approach. Not sure if I pulled it off though.
I don't like it, the front is just two renders places on a random background, the Square-Enix logo is squished, the back is just... no... and something seems wrong with that back 360 info.
Infact, the only thing I really liked is that tagline.
#14, To answer your critique:
The renders were rendered by me and also placed in various different places and resized alot and then drop shadows added on both. The background I feel is quite final fantasyish and is also heavily edited. Ok I guess I must fix that square enix logo :P. Please critique the back instead of heavily insulting it and I have no idea what you're talking about with the back 360 info.
EDIT: IGNORE VERSION 2. Wrong version uploaded. A fixed square enix logo will be in version 3. I repeat:
IGNORE VERSION 2
Ok ignore version 3 as well. For fuck sake this thing is annoying. If a mod could delete versions 2 and 3 I would be happy.
Ok finally worked! I'm sorry about all that and how the square enix logo didn't even get fixed in the end of it but something went wrong so I just had to upload the original file.
Ooooft, wow dude, you've greatly improved.
My only gripe is a small PEGI and stretched Square logo.
Just move the PEGI up a little bit, and switch it a little to the left, and it'll be perfect.
Fuck yeah, favouritng now.
#16-#20, Thanks! I really wasn't expecting such a good recieval for this box,I personally feel it is lacking alot. But I didn't want it to have the epic fantasy feel you know? I wanted it to feel minamilistic and yet still obviously final fantasy.
So thanks everyone :)
My winning entry for the summer competition round 1. Credit to ADFD for the template. Not much to say on this really,wanted to do a final fantasy box and just had a little play round so here it is.
Critique and comments welcome :)
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ooh dang. Love that front.
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Your best! This my friend may not get HoF but will get damn close.
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#2, just because you can almost see up her skirt ;).
Great box mate ;)
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Thanks guys :D
And #4, Very very close :P
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coool
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Nice one coolguy. Keep it up (:
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Pretty cool. You might want to put a render on the left side of the back to fill some more space. Ill fave though :)
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Nice!
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I like it, the only thing that I would say is that the Square-Enix logo looks stretched.
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Thanks everyone.
#10, In full view it doesn't. Imo anyway.
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It looks like the front and back are both part of an entire background, the characters look as if they are floating in air. The Square-Enix logo appears to be squished.
The back doesn't seem to have much structure.
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#12, Yeah the front and back are supposed to be part of an entire background and as for the characters floating I tried to put them out of the template to give it more possibilities. Also, for the whole thing I was trying to go for a minimalistic approach. Not sure if I pulled it off though.
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I don't like it, the front is just two renders places on a random background, the Square-Enix logo is squished, the back is just... no... and something seems wrong with that back 360 info.
Infact, the only thing I really liked is that tagline.
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#14, To answer your critique:
The renders were rendered by me and also placed in various different places and resized alot and then drop shadows added on both. The background I feel is quite final fantasyish and is also heavily edited. Ok I guess I must fix that square enix logo :P. Please critique the back instead of heavily insulting it and I have no idea what you're talking about with the back 360 info.
EDIT: IGNORE VERSION 2. Wrong version uploaded. A fixed square enix logo will be in version 3. I repeat:
IGNORE VERSION 2
Ok ignore version 3 as well. For fuck sake this thing is annoying. If a mod could delete versions 2 and 3 I would be happy.
Ok finally worked! I'm sorry about all that and how the square enix logo didn't even get fixed in the end of it but something went wrong so I just had to upload the original file.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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Hey nice but the green text box on the back kills it.
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cool box
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Awesome design, the green text sorta kinda doesn't fit with it but other than that it rocks!
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Ur getting way better at box arts. :D
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Ooooft, wow dude, you've greatly improved.
My only gripe is a small PEGI and stretched Square logo.
Just move the PEGI up a little bit, and switch it a little to the left, and it'll be perfect.
Fuck yeah, favouritng now.
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#16-#20, Thanks! I really wasn't expecting such a good recieval for this box,I personally feel it is lacking alot. But I didn't want it to have the epic fantasy feel you know? I wanted it to feel minamilistic and yet still obviously final fantasy.
So thanks everyone :)
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You expect me to look at your boxes if you can't comment on mine. Nice.
Anyways, the front is nice, back isn't. Green body of main text + This box = PHAIL.
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cooool, but I don't like the text at the back (font)
but FAV anyway.
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