This is pretty good, the front is not bad at all. I think the ship should be flying behind them though, right now its overlapping Falco's arm. Like CJP said, the grammar really needs to be worked on. And no offense, but for words you're having trouble spelling, just type it any way you want on Google and the correct spelling will show up. Also there's online dictionaries that are really helpful.
Hahaha, nice quote on the back, man. Seems more comedy, though. I mean, that really has nothing to do with the story or anything in any way, haha. People just make fun of Peppy like that.
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It's cool,I have to say this is your best.
But here are the flaws.
-I hate the star's.
-Logo isnt cut out good.
-Spine looks so empty.
-Not major,But the description has no grammar.
Other than that,It's cool.
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thanks i suck at spelling :(
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Did you draw it yourself? This has a good idea and I'm going to favorite your box. 5/5
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#4, Nah look at at the links and thanks
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This is pretty good, the front is not bad at all. I think the ship should be flying behind them though, right now its overlapping Falco's arm. Like CJP said, the grammar really needs to be worked on. And no offense, but for words you're having trouble spelling, just type it any way you want on Google and the correct spelling will show up. Also there's online dictionaries that are really helpful.
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#6, thanks man what words are spelled wrong and the ships look really bad behind them but i will try ;)
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Updated! moved the arwings
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me likeys =D
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It looks like the airwing is giving Falco a shot.
:/
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lol thanks guys anymore?
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Front looks geat.
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#12, thanks what geat is it great and neat? lol
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thanks spider
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dubble post woops
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I like the front, but the back needs more work.
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#16, how should i change it
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#13, bleh, keyboard slipping.
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"Role" should be Roll. But it's OK.
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oh dam
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this is great! i like the artwork. fav
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It's very nice artwork, I must favorite for the sake of it because Starfox PWNS!
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Hahaha, nice quote on the back, man. Seems more comedy, though. I mean, that really has nothing to do with the story or anything in any way, haha. People just make fun of Peppy like that.
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With more care and time.. this could look awsome!
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Cool box, faved...
ps. I had to say it... link
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