My bundle box for the bundle comp. round one. And my bundle is left for dead. The bundle includes:
-Left 4 Dead: Special Edition Game
-Left 4 Dead: Art of the Dead (Art Book)
-Left 4 Dead: Music of the Dead (Soundtrack)
-Left 4 Dead Xbox 360
-Left 4 Dead Action Figures
Credit: Silent oblivion for the amazing logos, Techne for the xbox temp., FinalFantasyer22 for the CD temp., and this guy link for the action figures, and Ray Blade for the screenshot borders
not trying to be mean but everything is bad, especially the logo. Front is plain and boring, back has 4 screenshots and a headline.... pretty unacceptable.
Edit: Oh and the esrb and dev logos are huge. I say you delete it and put some more work into this. Seems like you got a bit lazy.
Umm Lenny, i think not. How about i go on all your boxes and say they look like complete shit, and that you should delete them? I put allot of work into this and like the turn out, just because you don't like it you want me to delete it. Oh, and the game box comes in a bigger box with the 360, so why do i need a description?
I was trying to help you, regardless of how much effort and stuff you are displaying it doesn't look good. But if you think I'm being an ass. Ill explain each thing individually.
Front- very boring with huge esrb and Dev logo.
Back- No description like i said before. (apparently you've never purchased a bundle. The game disc in most cases has a description on the back)
Music CD- actually alright because of Minimalism
Art book- Some renders on red, looks effortless.
360- looks alright but obviously not hard to make.
Figures- great but you didn't make them. (which is not a problem)
And a boring Grey background with a Logo that in my opinion doesn't look great.
Part of becoming a good artist is learning how to take Criticism.
#4, You didn't do a good job of putting in the criticism originally, in my opinion. I'm glad you went back and said more specifically. Just saying that none of it looks good won't give the artist an idea what to fix.
I'm in agreement with most of your thoughts on it, ESRB and Dev needs to be sized down. The back is unappealing. The screen borders take up way too much space in my opinion.
The art book should be more interesting, have some creatures and some splatter on it to make it look better.
The 360 is fine, not much to it, but I don't have any objections.
I personally don't like the figures, but that's just me.
The presentation is okay. I think the objects should have reflections.
Yeah Lenny, you were coming off as a huge a-hole. How do you expect him to take criticism when you're just putting him down? Part of being a good Critiquer is knowing how to critique
Thanks for all the comments. And thank you Lenny for comming back and commenting, at first you were a real d-bag. And thanks you tleeart for your comments. I will just have to work harder on bundles in the future.
#9, I was a douche bag??? I should'nt have to explain myself when I say everythings bad. And I really could careless if you and DK wanna agree with tlearts stupid remark. "Didnt make good criticism". Grow the hell up.
#10, Dude, chill. I wouldn't have called you a douche bag, but if you're going to critique, you should give the artist an indication of what it is that makes you say everything's bad.
If I came by and told you one of yours was basically crap and didn't have any advice how to make it better, wouldn't you be ticked off about it? I think you could stand to grow up as well, CubbieFan also said thank you for elaborating.
It would be one thing if you were talking to someone who wouldn't listen to criticism, but I really don't think this is the case here.
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My bundle box for the bundle comp. round one. And my bundle is left for dead. The bundle includes:
-Left 4 Dead: Special Edition Game
-Left 4 Dead: Art of the Dead (Art Book)
-Left 4 Dead: Music of the Dead (Soundtrack)
-Left 4 Dead Xbox 360
-Left 4 Dead Action Figures
Credit: Silent oblivion for the amazing logos, Techne for the xbox temp., FinalFantasyer22 for the CD temp., and this guy link for the action figures, and Ray Blade for the screenshot borders
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not trying to be mean but everything is bad, especially the logo. Front is plain and boring, back has 4 screenshots and a headline.... pretty unacceptable.
Edit: Oh and the esrb and dev logos are huge. I say you delete it and put some more work into this. Seems like you got a bit lazy.
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Umm Lenny, i think not. How about i go on all your boxes and say they look like complete shit, and that you should delete them? I put allot of work into this and like the turn out, just because you don't like it you want me to delete it. Oh, and the game box comes in a bigger box with the 360, so why do i need a description?
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I was trying to help you, regardless of how much effort and stuff you are displaying it doesn't look good. But if you think I'm being an ass. Ill explain each thing individually.
Front- very boring with huge esrb and Dev logo.
Back- No description like i said before. (apparently you've never purchased a bundle. The game disc in most cases has a description on the back)
Music CD- actually alright because of Minimalism
Art book- Some renders on red, looks effortless.
360- looks alright but obviously not hard to make.
Figures- great but you didn't make them. (which is not a problem)
And a boring Grey background with a Logo that in my opinion doesn't look great.
Part of becoming a good artist is learning how to take Criticism.
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#4, You didn't do a good job of putting in the criticism originally, in my opinion. I'm glad you went back and said more specifically. Just saying that none of it looks good won't give the artist an idea what to fix.
I'm in agreement with most of your thoughts on it, ESRB and Dev needs to be sized down. The back is unappealing. The screen borders take up way too much space in my opinion.
The art book should be more interesting, have some creatures and some splatter on it to make it look better.
The 360 is fine, not much to it, but I don't have any objections.
I personally don't like the figures, but that's just me.
The presentation is okay. I think the objects should have reflections.
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Yeah Lenny, you were coming off as a huge a-hole. How do you expect him to take criticism when you're just putting him down? Part of being a good Critiquer is knowing how to critique
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#6, Believe me, I won't be taking any advice from a prick as yourself.
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#7 Fine, I just thought that you were an understanding person. But now I can see you're just a complete shithead.
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Thanks for all the comments. And thank you Lenny for comming back and commenting, at first you were a real d-bag. And thanks you tleeart for your comments. I will just have to work harder on bundles in the future.
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#9, I was a douche bag??? I should'nt have to explain myself when I say everythings bad. And I really could careless if you and DK wanna agree with tlearts stupid remark. "Didnt make good criticism". Grow the hell up.
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#10, Dude, chill. I wouldn't have called you a douche bag, but if you're going to critique, you should give the artist an indication of what it is that makes you say everything's bad.
If I came by and told you one of yours was basically crap and didn't have any advice how to make it better, wouldn't you be ticked off about it? I think you could stand to grow up as well, CubbieFan also said thank you for elaborating.
It would be one thing if you were talking to someone who wouldn't listen to criticism, but I really don't think this is the case here.
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i think it is very good just size down the ERSB and valve logo and add some more stuff to the art book i personnally like this cover
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