Not a bad attempt. I can see you spent some time on this, to go as far as find the address to Ubisoft. Anyway, I've got a few pointers.
Add a background, Clean up the choppy stuff around the Prince, make sue the text is properly capitalized and spaced, as well as punctuation marks placed accordingly.
You've got a bit of work to do, but with determination, you can get a lot better.
#2, You need to leave constructive criticism or you will get banned.
#2 and #4, those are unacceptable posts. If a box isn't good tell the person why, and tell them how to make it better. Look at Ray Blade's post to see how it's done right.
I dont really have much to say about it except hope you like it.
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Not a bad attempt. I can see you spent some time on this, to go as far as find the address to Ubisoft. Anyway, I've got a few pointers.
Add a background, Clean up the choppy stuff around the Prince, make sue the text is properly capitalized and spaced, as well as punctuation marks placed accordingly.
You've got a bit of work to do, but with determination, you can get a lot better.
#2, You need to leave constructive criticism or you will get banned.
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#2 and #4, those are unacceptable posts. If a box isn't good tell the person why, and tell them how to make it better. Look at Ray Blade's post to see how it's done right.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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