No matter what the quality of your boxes is, as long as you've got that fucking retarded picture of Sonic with Robotnik's clothes on, it'll always get -90% points for poor presentation.
All of your boxes are either for Sonic games, or games that have Sonic in them. And there's no need for the stupid Sonic on the side. It's just taking up space.
The box: Everything is choppy and the screenshots don't look very good. I also dislike the whole layout of the back, along with the text. It's also too plain.
you, know pretty good
only problems:
1.)the font is WAY too choppy, i can't read things half the time
2.) some characters are choppy but not that much
3.) Spelling
otherwise it's good, so i'll fav for your effort:D
1) Too much Sonic. I hate seeing Smash boxes with 2+ Sonic chars
2) Choppiness. Everything is choppy,
3) Spelling/grammar
4) Back's not good (-Bad bg -Bad layout -Screenshot borders don't fit style)
5) DEV and ESRB far too small.
It has potential. And hopefully you can fix this up once you are unbanned.
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ok, this one i just finished
(still can't do a worth-a-crap-relection to save my life =P)
fav or die, *pulls out gun and waits*
Edited at 1 decade ago
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You spelt PORTABLE wrong on the back cover. And ENVIRONMENTS. And CINEMATICS.
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It's kind of cool, but a lotof things are choppy.
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#2, stey 1n skuuwl
j.k.
yeah.... sorry bout that.. :/
Edited at 1 decade ago
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Dude, the sparks brush is not a lifestyle choice, I've noticed this on other boxes of yours
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I would fav this if it weren't so choppy with bad grammar.
Oh well, too bad.
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The front has serious potential...
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No matter what the quality of your boxes is, as long as you've got that fucking retarded picture of Sonic with Robotnik's clothes on, it'll always get -90% points for poor presentation.
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#8, LANGUAGE!
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Great box Eggboy!!
Your best!!!
The reflection is not that bad.Its quite good.
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#10, i dont really think so...
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trust me... it is...
Better than any of mine!!
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Hey, this is actually pretty good, Eggboy. Great job, 5/5
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All of your boxes are either for Sonic games, or games that have Sonic in them. And there's no need for the stupid Sonic on the side. It's just taking up space.
The box: Everything is choppy and the screenshots don't look very good. I also dislike the whole layout of the back, along with the text. It's also too plain.
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you, know pretty good
only problems:
1.)the font is WAY too choppy, i can't read things half the time
2.) some characters are choppy but not that much
3.) Spelling
otherwise it's good, so i'll fav for your effort:D
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I 100% agree with #8
Also I dont like how you made Sonic stand out more than PROPER Nintendo characters like Link, Pikachu or Kirby? This is a Nintendo game after all.
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There are some spelling errors but this is the best one i've seen so far! Awsome job!
4/5
I really do wish that Super Smash Bros DS existed.
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Good, but...
1) Too much Sonic. I hate seeing Smash boxes with 2+ Sonic chars
2) Choppiness. Everything is choppy,
3) Spelling/grammar
4) Back's not good (-Bad bg -Bad layout -Screenshot borders don't fit style)
5) DEV and ESRB far too small.
It has potential. And hopefully you can fix this up once you are unbanned.
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looks alot like koopadasher's
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