make the bungie logo white, switch the bungie logo and the microsoft logo places, center one of the two halo 3 logos, use relevant art, go for realism next time (the halo 3 cover would never fade a pic of mc in the background)...
overall, this isnt too bad.
#5, Crayon Man knows what box arts are supposed to look like though based on official ones so you should acknowledge his opinion, he knows what he's talking about.
#7, He has produced at least 5 of his own with his LnknPrkDude account and besides he doesn't have to make one to have an opinion, as long as he's nice about it you shouldn't complain.
#9, he said that they would never fade a pic of mc in the background and he could never know that unless he was the official Halo 3 box artist and the chances of that are slim. But i do respect his crutiques and i will soon update my box
ok v2 is a bit better you fixed some things but it still doesnt look quite right also MC has a horrid white outline which shows it was badly cut I know they have a render of that on planetrenders so look for the render on planetrenders or gamerenders whichever you prefer for the render first, then if you can't find it go to either one of the sites and take a tutorial on how to render in gimp. Then I reccomend finding a less blury and a higher res background pic try google and gamescanner.org or if you know any other site for stocks then use that I also reccomend moving the Bungie logo to the center and the MSGS logo a little bit closer to the corner they look bunched up right now you may think i'm being harsh but this gets a 3.25/5 which is just a bit better then average. I hope these crits help
this is my first 360 box
i know it is a little crowded, but if you find something wrong, please comment
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it loooks cool but the microsoft logo should be more centered and im a bit confused because of the faded MC!!
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good but you don't need 2 halo 3 logos
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make the bungie logo white, switch the bungie logo and the microsoft logo places, center one of the two halo 3 logos, use relevant art, go for realism next time (the halo 3 cover would never fade a pic of mc in the background)...
overall, this isnt too bad.
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#4, why not, u dont know how the halo 3 box is gonna look
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#5, Crayon Man knows what box arts are supposed to look like though based on official ones so you should acknowledge his opinion, he knows what he's talking about.
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#6, well mabey he should make his own Halo 3 box instead of telling me how mine should look, it is my box, i can make it look however I want to.
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oh, and #2, i made the fade as a zoom-in of MC's head
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#7, He has produced at least 5 of his own with his LnknPrkDude account and besides he doesn't have to make one to have an opinion, as long as he's nice about it you shouldn't complain.
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#9, he said that they would never fade a pic of mc in the background and he could never know that unless he was the official Halo 3 box artist and the chances of that are slim. But i do respect his crutiques and i will soon update my box
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ok v2 is a bit better you fixed some things but it still doesnt look quite right also MC has a horrid white outline which shows it was badly cut I know they have a render of that on planetrenders so look for the render on planetrenders or gamerenders whichever you prefer for the render first, then if you can't find it go to either one of the sites and take a tutorial on how to render in gimp. Then I reccomend finding a less blury and a higher res background pic try google and gamescanner.org or if you know any other site for stocks then use that I also reccomend moving the Bungie logo to the center and the MSGS logo a little bit closer to the corner they look bunched up right now you may think i'm being harsh but this gets a 3.25/5 which is just a bit better then average. I hope these crits help
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