Ok, this isnt too bad for a first. DS under Super Smash Bros. should be in a fatter font that really catches someone's eye. Mario actually very nice. The only problem is that you have most of his face cut off so we can see his hat. Switch out the RP logo for T and make the Nintendo logo bigger.Lastly, make Mario's face visible and it will look great. For now, a 2.5/5, but if you make the changes I will make it higher.
I agree with Deathspawn. The rest of the people commenting have yet to make any really good boxes of their own, so...well, you get the idea. Make the boxes on the left and right bigger (The ones that have your characters in them) If I had to guess, I would say you just took the image of the Super Smash Bros Brawl logo on the black background and painted over Brawl. That's why the box is black, am I right? You didn't cut out the logo, so you put black bars around the Mario image to make it look like you did it intentionally. Make your RP logo an E. With DS grpahics, the game will be rated E, like the N64 version. Make the WiFi logo bigger, and do something to Mario. My way of thinking about it is: if you saw this in a store, would you buy the game if it had a box like this? Probably not. Always try to strive for that.
Wow, this place is stupid. I was just posting something for fun, but now I realize that most of the people here are just jerks who don't even make boxes of their own.
#10, Some of them are, some of them arent. If you posted it in the forums more people would have liked you. If you make another one and posted i in the forums, people can help you to correct your mistakes.
This is my FIRST box art, so don't be too harsh. Please, only constructive critisism.
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Post boxes in the forums first, get gimp at www.gimp.org and put some effort into your boxes.
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Ok, this isnt too bad for a first. DS under Super Smash Bros. should be in a fatter font that really catches someone's eye. Mario actually very nice. The only problem is that you have most of his face cut off so we can see his hat. Switch out the RP logo for T and make the Nintendo logo bigger.Lastly, make Mario's face visible and it will look great. For now, a 2.5/5, but if you make the changes I will make it higher.
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1.34769593289/5 not bad for a first. just a little much on the black. and ds should go at the bottom in a diff. font
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also for the future... use either gimp... paint.net ... or paintshop pro
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I agree with Deathspawn. The rest of the people commenting have yet to make any really good boxes of their own, so...well, you get the idea. Make the boxes on the left and right bigger (The ones that have your characters in them) If I had to guess, I would say you just took the image of the Super Smash Bros Brawl logo on the black background and painted over Brawl. That's why the box is black, am I right? You didn't cut out the logo, so you put black bars around the Mario image to make it look like you did it intentionally. Make your RP logo an E. With DS grpahics, the game will be rated E, like the N64 version. Make the WiFi logo bigger, and do something to Mario. My way of thinking about it is: if you saw this in a store, would you buy the game if it had a box like this? Probably not. Always try to strive for that.
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Darthspazz, sorry. I thought it was Deathspawn.
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ALright, I'll take some of these suggestions yo make it better. If I could only figure out where I got the images originally. :P
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No. Please no. 1/5
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Wow, this place is stupid. I was just posting something for fun, but now I realize that most of the people here are just jerks who don't even make boxes of their own.
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#10, Some of them are, some of them arent. If you posted it in the forums more people would have liked you. If you make another one and posted i in the forums, people can help you to correct your mistakes.
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