I reckon that your massive pitfall in many of your boxes is that you re-use the "fancy" font for your tagline in your main text as well. Personally, I think this is a bad idea, and you should use a clearer serif or sans-serif (dependant on genre) font instead. In addition, you seem to have put your text very close to the edge of the back. I've never actually seen this happen on an official box to such an extent, and I reckon that it would be better if you could move it all down and in further from the edge of the box. There are two images Kratos on the front which honestly doesn't look great. Coupled with the rather obnoxiously vivid red in the top right of the front, the centre of attention in the box is a bit off to where you want it (on the back of Kratos).
Thanks for the feedback. Unortunately, i deleted the original xcf file (the gimp equivalent to a psd) so i cant update this one. But I'll definitely keep your advice in mind for my future projects :)
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My favorite GoW game
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Looks Great & Like It . . .
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Very Nice ;)
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thanks guys :)
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I reckon that your massive pitfall in many of your boxes is that you re-use the "fancy" font for your tagline in your main text as well. Personally, I think this is a bad idea, and you should use a clearer serif or sans-serif (dependant on genre) font instead. In addition, you seem to have put your text very close to the edge of the back. I've never actually seen this happen on an official box to such an extent, and I reckon that it would be better if you could move it all down and in further from the edge of the box. There are two images Kratos on the front which honestly doesn't look great. Coupled with the rather obnoxiously vivid red in the top right of the front, the centre of attention in the box is a bit off to where you want it (on the back of Kratos).
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Thanks for the feedback. Unortunately, i deleted the original xcf file (the gimp equivalent to a psd) so i cant update this one. But I'll definitely keep your advice in mind for my future projects :)
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Not bad at all. Perhaps put cases outside around the art.
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nice.
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