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Sonic and the Black Knight box art cover
By avatar Luiz43 1 on July 26th, 2013
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just a random box,took 2 hours,i am kinda happy with the results...

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aldimon 22 [ 1 decade ago ]

This box is your first one, so I'll be gentle.
It is visible that some effort went into this box. You tried to edit sonic on the front and match the colors for a uniform look (the logos etc)
But there are some misplaced things.
The ESRB Logo is too big and too close the the edge. Same for the SONIC TEAM and SEGA logo.
Make them smaller on your next box.
And then, frankly, it looks as if sonic is either floating or a giant.
Additionally, I've got to admit that this effect does not look good, sorry :/
The Spine looks fine.
There is too much negative space on the back. Try to make a sketch before starting with a box so you can get an overall concept.
The screenshots are too big. A Tagline is missing.
The text on the bottom of the back is too big and the font is not so great. Try to mess around with fonts and colors and placements.
And please: Use the Works in Progress section in the forums. You'll get loads of help there.

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Luiz43 1 [ 1 decade ago ]

thanks,the esrb box problem is actually that i made a mistake swithing from esbr to pegi,i was going to do a shadow the hedgehog box,once again,thanks for help.Oh and another thing,the draw effect that was putted into the background and sonic wass all made in gimp,i am still trying to see what each Add-on do.

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