My 2nd box. Came out better as I originally expected.
Will post a printable if folks want it.
P.S. Tactical superiority.
[ Box updated on July 16th, 2013 ] [ original ]
PlanetSide 2 Box Cover Comments
Comment on Demartan's PlanetSide 2 Box Art / Cover.
Love the simplicity of the front and the structure of the back!
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Thank you very much.
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@Demartan
You should not place the "Loyality until Death Edition" Line so close to the top, though.
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@aldimon now that you mention it, I fiddled with the text a bit and see that I indeed should have placed it just a tiny bit lower. I added the Only On Playstation as one of the last things so that's what happened lol. Thanks for the critique!
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@Demartan
You're welcome.
Looking forward to your next box. And this deserves more attention.
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I don't really like the look of the black PS4 logo on the blue bar, I'd suggest to change the PS logo to white on blue (the contrast between these colors works better than with black on blue)
It's kinda weird to only see the title on the spine imo.? I think the front of the box is supposed to be minimal, right? but if your not familiar with the game, how does one know what the game is called by only looking at the front? you first look at the front of a box, right? (that's mostly the first thing that catches the viewers eye)
The front's red and black background looks a bit too clean for my liking, maybe by adding a light texture to the front, it could spice things up a bit? it's a game about a planet, so a kind of sand/rock texture or something similair, would bring up that planet theme.
The back looks better (the specs are kinda small though)
These are just my thoughts, don't feel attacked by my critism.
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Thanks for the critique! The black-on-blue thing is indeed present, no idea how I missed that. I tried putting a hexagon pattern (and then a dirt pattern) overlaying the red glow, but it turned out to be just too cluttery.
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Updated with critique. Thanks guys, looks better now.
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