Hey guys...! I wanted to design a cover for this title before the game coming out.!! But because of that there wasn't enough resources, I couldn't do something better than this on back. Hope you like it and another hope to go on HOF with my first Box.!!!
Beyond Two Souls Box Cover Comments
Comment on lilix's Beyond Two Souls Box Art / Cover.
Good Job
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Thanks.!!
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Nice box , o_O
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Thank you man.!!
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Very very nice lilix.
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Thank you ( Sepas Saeid jan )..!!
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Wow nice cover, the only thing is that the template for your cover looks stretched a bit.
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You are right.!!
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It's really good and professional looking
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Thank you man.!!
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Great job for a first. My only critique is you should try to work on the text placement on the back.
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Thank you...Can you guide me to fix it? I mean what should I do?
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Great design. Very professional.
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Thanks.!!
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Excellent debut, I love the unique design you chose! One piece I may advise for future boxes is to try more dynamic fonts for the back - a good site is www.dafont.com
Asides from that, awesome stuff. I look forward to seeing what you come up with next
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Really really thanks to you man.!! And another thanks because you have guide me.!!
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For a 1st box I think this is really good, a little stretched in my opinion but that doesn't take away from the quality of the design. Great job.
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Thank you.!!
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Really Nice Bro . . . (Baraye Avalin Kar Kheyli Ghashange Dadash,Dar Zemn Khosh Omadi:X ,Montazere Karaye Khobet Hastam)(â—Žoâ—Ž)
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Thanks.!!
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This is amazing, Obviously you have talent, Used and improved for great design.
Good luck :)
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Thank you.!!
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Without a doubt one of the better firsts around here. The front is pretty cool and I'm curious where you found that image.. Now for the back is where this struggles a little bit. Usually you want to make sure that the front and back match up so they look like they are part of the same design, and as you can tell the front is very colorful and paint like while the back has no sign of that, this could do with a tag line as well. Now the quotes need to be popped out more, u would want them to be bigger and not the same font as everything else. Also not sure if the first quote works all that well, even if its true, the game looks like its story driven and not bragging about how violent it is.
So that's a few things u can work on and practice. But like I said, this is still pretty good for a first and u will succeed around here if u keep this up and keep practicing. Good job
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Thanks for your lovely comment and I'll use your advice in my next works.!! And about the game, it's true that this title is one of the greatest games of all times.!!
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Welcome!
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This looks great, and the only main gripe I have with the cover is the colours of the reviews, which are rather unclear at the moment, but you've got good promise as a designer and are very creative. Very promising for a first box.
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Thanks.!!
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The template does seem a little stretched. Other than that, it's amazing for a first.
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Thanks.!!
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Holy shit I love this
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Thanks and I love you too, Man.!!
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The template bothers me.
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I agree with Mattstar, some of the text could utilize the space more thoroughly. The body text and screenshots have some unresolved space between them which could be fixed by playing with the layout some. But overall, wonderful first submission! Welcome to the site. :)
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Thanks to all of you guys.!!
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Congratulations on the HoF :)
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Thank you.!!
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Congrats, this is a big accomplishment!
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Yes and I'm appreciating it.!! Thank you very much.!!
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Nice..Good Job !
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Thanks.!!
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Congratulations!
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Thanks.!!
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Wow. Great job dood! Congrats on a HoF! Fav+ Front is excellent and logo well visible. All around nice box you've got there.
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Thank you.!!
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Well, that escalated quickly. Congrats!
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Yeah... Really thanks to you for your useful advice in your private message.!!
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I love this box.
:D
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Appreciated and Thank you.!!
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whoa :o you did an awesome job there!
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Thanks.!!
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very nice lilix.
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Thanks.!!
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so so nice .......great job
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Thank you.!!
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This is good, the front is eye-catchy and it looks like you put a lot of thought into the layout on the back. My only criticism is maybe there's too much on it, like the PS move logo which is pretty big and ugly.
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Thanks for you nice comment.!!
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Look Great.very good jop...
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