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This is my first box, open to any kind of constructive criticism however harsh it may be.
Approximate number of hours spent: 7-8 hours.
Alan Wake's American Nightmare Box Cover Comments
Comment on B O M's Alan Wake's American Nightmare Box Art / Cover.
Nice & good for 1st time ..........
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Thank you very much.
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printable please
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Really? o:
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Yeah this is really good. Im impressed.
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Thank you.
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The 3D template is a little off, but besides that this is a very good start. I look forward to seeing where you go in future.
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I agree. Thanks for your support.
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Sweet!
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Thanks.
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The front is pretty neat but the back is a little bleh. I think you could have done more with the back. The description text is far to big, you should decreases size and add more. And also the review ratings could have been altered a little more. Right now they are all the same size and all in a row, which makes the left side empty to the eye, even though it might no be. Also I think the reflection could use a decrease in opacity, but thats just a personal nit pick. All in all though not bad for a first one, and better than most for a first. Keep it up
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Yeah I agree with all of your feedback. I do have a lot of trouble with developing good backs so I guess I really need to just practise alot more. Also i'll take into consideration the reviews and the opacity of the reflection when I make my next box. Thank you for your feedback, it is appreciated.
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I agree with Deividas, otherwise the colors are good, but the presentation is off, if you're gonna cut the cover into a front, spine, and back like that you should take off the plastic.
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The front came together nicely, and quickly I might add. I was unsure of the logos placement at first sight, but you adjusted it's colors and lighting well against its surroundings, and likes quite natural.
One thing that immediately stands out to me, on the front, is the shadow placed behind Wake. I don't usually like shadows behind characters unless intentions are to display them against a cardboard backdrop, and even then it's questionable. A subtle glow could still differentiate Wake from his surroundings without him looking flat and two-dimensional. It's also worth noting that the darkness brings out some of the imperfections in rendering the image.
Any comments I could make about the back have already been mentioned by Deividas, and I'd just sound redundant repeating them.
Overall, good work for a first submission.
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I wasn't going to do the shadow at first but it's a shame I did, I was trying to make it quite subtle but I realise now it does stand out quite a bit. Thank you for your input. ~
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Gripping!
nice one man, i like it
plz add printable...
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I'll try and put it up asap! Thanks!
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The overall design is amazing, but I think you overacted the lightning from Alan's gunshot
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Thank you!
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Just gorgeous.
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Thank you! Means alot.
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very nice i love it.
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Much appreciated!
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Friggin' awesome.
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Thank you, friend!
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Great first box and quite original as well (I love the textures and brushes)
Welcome aboard and I'm looking forward to see some more from you ;)
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Why thank you! ;D
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That front is amazing. But I do agree the back needs a little tweaking.
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Thanks, maybe you could give me some tips for backs sometime. ^^
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hi mate very nice design please put the printable
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nice
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Nice
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