This reminds me a lot of Moogle's work. And it's a nice design. But... I feel like the pink needs some contrast. The pink doesn't feel natural here. It feels tacked on. And it makes it difficult to see the images individually. A few different colors thrown in, or just more contrast in the pink would have helped a lot.
When I saw this cover I thought Moogle made it. Too be honest, it looks like the cover was made and then it was grayscaled the topped with layers of pink and blue set at something luminosity. It's overbearingly pink and bright, and the text feels really slammed in there. Excellent in concept, but could use some work.
Overall pretty good (I also thought Moogle when I saw this). The only thing that bugs me is a couple of darker/grayed color areas on the front. It's got a nice feel to it for the most part, though.
#2, Thank you!
#3, Thanks for the suggestions!
#4, Well that is not how I made it at all! Oh well. I had more text on there than that before, but I took out a large amount of it. Thanks though!
#5, I appreciate it!
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My entry into the Pretty in Pink competition.
Credit to master_general for the template.
Thank you to those who helped critique it.
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Beautiful. This needs Masterworks.
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This reminds me a lot of Moogle's work. And it's a nice design. But... I feel like the pink needs some contrast. The pink doesn't feel natural here. It feels tacked on. And it makes it difficult to see the images individually. A few different colors thrown in, or just more contrast in the pink would have helped a lot.
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When I saw this cover I thought Moogle made it. Too be honest, it looks like the cover was made and then it was grayscaled the topped with layers of pink and blue set at something luminosity. It's overbearingly pink and bright, and the text feels really slammed in there. Excellent in concept, but could use some work.
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Overall pretty good (I also thought Moogle when I saw this). The only thing that bugs me is a couple of darker/grayed color areas on the front. It's got a nice feel to it for the most part, though.
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#2, Thank you!
#3, Thanks for the suggestions!
#4, Well that is not how I made it at all! Oh well. I had more text on there than that before, but I took out a large amount of it. Thanks though!
#5, I appreciate it!
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I love this. So damn much.
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#7, Thanks, man!
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The front really is something.
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Nice, the colors are amazing.
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Holy Molly Titan you made my day.
Love the color bright thing. It's awesome I should try this out on my next work
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