The presentation kills it. Way too big and the box is stuck in the corner. I really like the front but the back needs work. The text is hard to read and the screenshots are unorganized. The back is overall very messy
#2, Yea I thought the presentation did too, when I was working on it, it seemed ok, when I submitted it, it looked like that, and all small, but I do agree the back is messy, I'm not very good at back, I'm better at fronts.
Your fronts good. The back needs some work. First, you should start off by having a render focal point(A Main character) on the side of the back. Next, change the background. Don't use one that has characters on it. Try using an abstract one, or even just the one on the front. Next, have a good subtitle for the back, like "Kirby's back and ready for a new adventure!", or something of that sort. Also, give the text and outline of a color that fits the box. Now for the screenshots. Use english ones if you are making an english box. English as in the words. Oh, and one more thing, Don't use paint. If you just fix the back up, this box could turn out nice.
Here are some programs to use when making boxes.
Gimp-http://www.gimp.org/
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The Best Box I Made, I agree the back isnt very good, But I think the front is epic, plus this time I added and actual background for it, Credit
Logo-JoeyTheHedgehog
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The presentation kills it. Way too big and the box is stuck in the corner. I really like the front but the back needs work. The text is hard to read and the screenshots are unorganized. The back is overall very messy
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#2, Yea I thought the presentation did too, when I was working on it, it seemed ok, when I submitted it, it looked like that, and all small, but I do agree the back is messy, I'm not very good at back, I'm better at fronts.
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Your fronts good. The back needs some work. First, you should start off by having a render focal point(A Main character) on the side of the back. Next, change the background. Don't use one that has characters on it. Try using an abstract one, or even just the one on the front. Next, have a good subtitle for the back, like "Kirby's back and ready for a new adventure!", or something of that sort. Also, give the text and outline of a color that fits the box. Now for the screenshots. Use english ones if you are making an english box. English as in the words. Oh, and one more thing, Don't use paint. If you just fix the back up, this box could turn out nice.
Here are some programs to use when making boxes.
Gimp-http://www.gimp.org/
Paint.NET-http://www.getpaint.net/
Adobe Photoshop(Trial)-http://www.adobe.com/products/photoshop/compare/
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#4, I gotz gimp.
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#5, Ok, then just do what I said for the back and the back would turn out better.
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