I wanted to make my a Batman Arkham City boxart that stands out from the others. Wanted to give the game a different colortone and look. Like I decided to change up the logo. Really put alot of hard work into this one, but had fun with it as well. I think it came out perfect. Cause I actually imagined it coming out just like this. Hope you guys like it.
Why do people use the grouped style over and over without removing such big gaps between words? And why do they use caps for a grouped style text that's so long? It's neither pleasing for the eye, nor bringing out the readability.
Your usual problem. Very good work, but typography is your weak spot :/
like always,nice box jeven.i really like the colors which you have worked on a lot.Am i right? anyway definitely faving it and i hope it gets a Hof.If possible can you have a look at my new box.I would really appreciate it:)
I wanted to like this.. but that render on the front is just terrible.
Batman Begins body + Armor Suit from Arkham + mis-aligned neck to body = disapointment.
That and I was about to make this same box damnit.
Too much Batman on the front fro me, but the overall box is nice. Like how you made the render on the back toned and fit in with the rest of the color scheme.
#4, why you put your nose in every matter?
Some people here maybe want EXACTLY this type of group text style!
have you thought about it before?
just because you do not like, it must also be so for the other or what?
come down off your high horse! we now know that YOU are the 15+ years graphic designer blah blah blah! You have to nag here ALL around!
this box looks so awesome! this might just be in that form on the shelves! + fav
#17, In no one's defense I don't see the problem, wasa-bi left an opinion, everyone has a different one. Not everyone likes the same thing, not knowing that fact, can make this website hell.
#17, there's a difference between "i don't like it" and "there's ways to improve". Plus: You haven't faved anything up to this point... And once more: I am not here for ranks and favs. If people fav my stuff it's nice, but it's no MUST.
In case you haven't noticed: My critiques are always based on technical knowledge, including typography, photoshop, etc. I do say so if I don't like some stuff, but I never tell people to change something because I don't like it. For example: You are free to use the grouped text, but make sure you use it well.
And now I request you to soft-pedal, please! thanks! It's not necessary to spread your personal problems on other peoples art, profiles, etc.
Edit: I have to amend the post! That Knarren(f)artist got some favs, they just were not displayed before. Oh well - but that favs are far from being the king of favs.
Great job on this. I think you're getting much better with your text/placement. It works really well here to me. I'm really liking the color tone too. Something different, and it looks very nice.
I wanted to make my a Batman Arkham City boxart that stands out from the others. Wanted to give the game a different colortone and look. Like I decided to change up the logo. Really put alot of hard work into this one, but had fun with it as well. I think it came out perfect. Cause I actually imagined it coming out just like this. Hope you guys like it.
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Incredible. Fav+ ^^
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Very cool, man!
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Why do people use the grouped style over and over without removing such big gaps between words? And why do they use caps for a grouped style text that's so long? It's neither pleasing for the eye, nor bringing out the readability.
Your usual problem. Very good work, but typography is your weak spot :/
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#4, Agreed.
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like always,nice box jeven.i really like the colors which you have worked on a lot.Am i right? anyway definitely faving it and i hope it gets a Hof.If possible can you have a look at my new box.I would really appreciate it:)
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Grungy and great.
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I wanted to like this.. but that render on the front is just terrible.
Batman Begins body + Armor Suit from Arkham + mis-aligned neck to body = disapointment.
That and I was about to make this same box damnit.
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Brilliant, another nice box mate.
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I'm drooling over this. forget that nonsense about too little text.
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#8, Yea I see what you mean. But the render is actually fine. Look at batman in the poster from Batman begins. The neck alignment is fine.
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Nice box as always, but that logo bothers me and the character on front, but it's still worth a fav.
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#11, If the neck alignment is right.. then he's pushing his chest out. Looks weird. :l
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#13, Thats Batman for ya.
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The front render is weird but the colors are fantastic!
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Too much Batman on the front fro me, but the overall box is nice. Like how you made the render on the back toned and fit in with the rest of the color scheme.
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#4, why you put your nose in every matter?
Some people here maybe want EXACTLY this type of group text style!
have you thought about it before?
just because you do not like, it must also be so for the other or what?
come down off your high horse! we now know that YOU are the 15+ years graphic designer blah blah blah! You have to nag here ALL around!
this box looks so awesome! this might just be in that form on the shelves! + fav
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#17, In no one's defense I don't see the problem, wasa-bi left an opinion, everyone has a different one. Not everyone likes the same thing, not knowing that fact, can make this website hell.
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#17, Man. I really dont think that was necessary. Wasi-Bi really helps me out in becoming a better artist. His advice makes me alot more experienced.
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#18 and #19
Yeah ...
We no longer have our own opinion!
We focus our work on wasa-bi's statements!
We are the lemmings!
Come on, your boxes are absolutely great!
And be honest, even without him they would be!
Farewell to the self-confidence!
Critique: ok
constantly, but really to find fault constantly: NOPE!
That was MY opinion! Basta.
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small addition:
Think about it all the time:
You're faving always his boxes. He does not consider it necessary to fave A SINGLE BOX!
you hear the bells not ringing?
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#20, You're only aloud to have your own opinion once you can make a solid judgment on a person you dislike.
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Printable Added!!!
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Edited at 1 decade ago
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#17, there's a difference between "i don't like it" and "there's ways to improve". Plus: You haven't faved anything up to this point... And once more: I am not here for ranks and favs. If people fav my stuff it's nice, but it's no MUST.
In case you haven't noticed: My critiques are always based on technical knowledge, including typography, photoshop, etc. I do say so if I don't like some stuff, but I never tell people to change something because I don't like it. For example: You are free to use the grouped text, but make sure you use it well.
And now I request you to soft-pedal, please! thanks! It's not necessary to spread your personal problems on other peoples art, profiles, etc.
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Sorry for DP. Removed the first.
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Edit: I have to amend the post! That Knarren(f)artist got some favs, they just were not displayed before. Oh well - but that favs are far from being the king of favs.
Sorry for "spam" @ jevangod
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Yea stop being a meanie Wasi-bi ;)
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WOAH! You misspelled my name! RAAAAAAGE XD
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Great job on this. I think you're getting much better with your text/placement. It works really well here to me. I'm really liking the color tone too. Something different, and it looks very nice.
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nothing to say about it, except that it's ridiculously AWESOME!
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