My new Kirby boxart. It's Kirby's Dream Land 3 for the SNES. I really love this game, so I thought of making a boxart for it.
To be honest, It didn't actually turned out as I wanted to have it, but I still like how it is now.
It's nothing special, but well made. The front looks very official too.
The back however... The Headline seems off, because everything is straight, just the headline got that wave. It would be okay if you made the font similar to the logo on the front, but not with that basic Arial/Futura-type.
The texts flow at the lower image seems a bit off too.
Got better, but you too have to mind the type area at the headline on the back (I showed it here: link so you may get the idea)
and covering the "important" is not very clever ;) It's IMPORTANT, so don't hide it.
The text makeup is a step in the right direction, but there's still room for improvement.
I agree with wasa-bi about the IMPORTANT. Maybe you could shrink that red guy a bit. Also, not that it's necessary, but did you consider making a cartridge?
The box jutting out of the black edge on the front would normally have another tagline in it. You should probably add one, or if you don't want one, remove that part so it doesn't interfere with the art.
My new Kirby boxart. It's Kirby's Dream Land 3 for the SNES. I really love this game, so I thought of making a boxart for it.
To be honest, It didn't actually turned out as I wanted to have it, but I still like how it is now.
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I like it, my only problem is the tagline looks odd. But otherwise GJ!
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It's nothing special, but well made. The front looks very official too.
The back however... The Headline seems off, because everything is straight, just the headline got that wave. It would be okay if you made the font similar to the logo on the front, but not with that basic Arial/Futura-type.
The texts flow at the lower image seems a bit off too.
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#3, Ok, I see what I can do.
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Here you go, this was the best I could do. :)
(sorry for double-post)
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Got better, but you too have to mind the type area at the headline on the back (I showed it here: link so you may get the idea)
and covering the "important" is not very clever ;) It's IMPORTANT, so don't hide it.
The text makeup is a step in the right direction, but there's still room for improvement.
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I agree with wasa-bi about the IMPORTANT. Maybe you could shrink that red guy a bit. Also, not that it's necessary, but did you consider making a cartridge?
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#7, I will see what I can do. About the cartridge, I'm not that into making one. To be honest I never actually made one.
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The box jutting out of the black edge on the front would normally have another tagline in it. You should probably add one, or if you don't want one, remove that part so it doesn't interfere with the art.
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#4, good job man
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