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Scott Pilgrim vs The World box art cover
By avatar super-mega-hyper-sonic 40 on January 4th, 2011

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super-mega-hyper-sonic 40 [ 9 years ago ]

Hey guys!
My first box of 2011.

Huge thanks to Squall for being a huge help.

I know about the age ratings I'l fix later.

C+C guys!

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super-mega-hyper-sonic 40 [ 9 years ago ]

Added printable.
Thanks for the fav mabik.

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Prong1978 18 [ 9 years ago ]

I think the box looks really nice with one exception. The spine looks extremely boring. I also found a couple typos on the back. The first time you mention Ramona, you didn't capitalize "flowers." Also, you have everwhere spelled "evrywhere."

Other than that, it looks snazzy!

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sd1833 47 [ 9 years ago ]

The front's clean, decent, though it's missing the rating and developer logos. This is a multiplayer game, no? I think you could have emphasized that more on the back, adding the three characters instead of having Scott all by his lonesome.

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KoopaDasher 30 [ 9 years ago ]

For a game based on a comic book series, there's a severe lack of comic elements here. You have text, possibly too much text, but no text box? No speech bubble? Nothing to separate this text from the background? Also, having screenshots in music notes means you can't really see them. Remember, this is a package design meant to sell the game, and people want to be able to see the screenshots to know what the game looks like.

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spypilot 42 [ 9 years ago ]

#3, and you spelled "everywhere" everwhere

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super-mega-hyper-sonic 40 [ 9 years ago ]

Thanks for the comments guys.

I think I'm about to give up Boxarting. I have lost all enthusiastic and my boxes are going downhill fast.=(

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GameRoomProductions 42 [ 9 years ago ]

I think the front and back are a bit too different. I love the back's feel, but the front is much less exciting. I think if you tried to make the front more like the back you'd be golden.
Now for the back; first of all, I love your tagline. Perfect for the game, but Koopa hit the nail on the head. It has too much text and not enough comic book. That's where you went wrong a bit.
This box can be fantastic, don't give up, just push yourself a little further. You can do it :)

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CoH GHOST 007 24 [ 9 years ago ]

it's very colourful, i like it, but there could be more :/

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Higashi89 47 [ 9 years ago ]

Quite nice, looks a bit "lazy" to me but overall it's nice.

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super-mega-hyper-sonic 40 [ 9 years ago ]

Thanks.

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roza 43 [ 9 years ago ]

if only it had screen shots! and Id say use the new xbox template, make it seem abit more full y'know

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super-mega-hyper-sonic 40 [ 9 years ago ]

#12, It does have screens in the notes =P

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roza 43 [ 9 years ago ]

#13 ah so it does. didnt see them at first

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