6,740
]
No Printable Available
[ Box updated on September 3rd, 2010 ] [ original ]
The Jeff Dunham Show Box Cover Comments
Comment on Watsonator117's The Jeff Dunham Show Box Art / Cover.
Movies » The Jeff Dunham Show Box Cover
← →
My Jeff Dunham Show box :) enjoy!
Credit:
Both Jeff Dunham car renders: Titan38
Everything else: Me
Please comment and tell me what you think
Edited at 1 decade ago
[ Reply ]
You totally expected a fav from me :D
[ Reply ]
#2 haha thank you :) I expect that you also like the presentation
[ Reply ]
There are a few images that are lower quality than others. Also the cut out job of some of the images is terrible(Jeff's Hair on the back for example.)
[ Reply ]
#4 Yeah I understand that a couple images are lower quality than others but it's the best I could find but it's only a minor thing so I'm not too worried about it. Thank you for your input though :)
EDIT: I fixed Jeff's hair on the back
Edited at 1 decade ago
[ Reply ]
My honest opinion is that the presentation is too distracting, maybe make it smaller and just have your username logo in there? Just saying because the box seems to be too small and is overthrown by everything else when you're not in full view.
Edited at 1 decade ago
[ Reply ]
#6 Okay, I updated it and fixed the presentation. I also added Sweet Daddy Dee because I forgot to put him in before.
[ Reply ]
Thats Awesome great job
[ Reply ]
#8 Thanks man and thanks for the fav! :)
Edited at 1 decade ago
[ Reply ]
I really like all the images separated into different shapes
[ Reply ]
#10 Thanks for the comment and the fav woopwoop :) is there any changes or improvements that I can make to this box in order to make it better?
[ Reply ]
this was a great show but wasn't it canceled after a few eps or is it still playing?
[ Reply ]
#12 It was cancelled because it cost so much to produce. It was a funny show though! Jeff Dunham is a lot funnier in person though. I went and saw him 3 weeks ago.
[ Reply ]
I like the layout of everything. Well done.
[ Reply ]
#14 Thanks man! :) and thanks for the fav
[ Reply ]
The front looks very good, I just don't like of the black and the layout off the back, 7/10.
[ Reply ]
#16 Alright I'll change the back some more and update it :)
[ Reply ]
Good but you should add a background to the back.
[ Reply ]
#18 I edited the back and gave it more action! :)
I updated it to version 4!! Please comment on the changes and tell me what you think
[ Reply ]
It vaguely reminds me of the boxes for South Park. Rather strange. The box is nice, but I feel that the cartoony-look I feel goes bad with the car. But overall, a very nice box!
[ Reply ]
#20 Yeah I didn't really know which approach to take with this box but I think it came out rather nice! :) thank you for your input
[ Reply ]
It's not too bad, a little too busy for me though.
[ Reply ]
#22 Thanks for you opinion dude :)
[ Reply ]
It's way too much going on here. The layout you have gone with doesn't work when there are no distinctions between the pictures (like frames or color). Looking at it closely I get the impression that the placement of the pictures are random without much thought seeing how many of their faces are cut of by the logo for example. The presentation being just as busy doesn't really help either.
[ Reply ]
#34 Yeah I agree that everything looks really busy but that was the design I was going for
[ Reply ]
#13, I think you misspelled "because it was a shitty show."
[ Reply ]
#26 It had it's moments
[ Reply ]
I think there's too much Achmed on the front, and the screenshots all thrown together with no border or anything seems unprofessional to me. The back is better, the lack of borders is less noticeable.
[ Reply ]
#28 I'll see what I can do to make it look more professional
[ Reply ]
Back is ok for the most part but the front is just a big mess with too much stuff going on at once. I suggest making the from simpler.
I would also make presentation less distracting.
[ Reply ]
#30 Okay thanks for the advice!
[ Reply ]
The back and front look like a magazine collage I did in second grade. Maybe try putting some sort of boder between the images or make the car with the guy who can't make real life friends so he drives around with puppets more the focal point, like make it bigger or more in the center of the box.
Also, the presentation is kinda big....
Not your greatest box, but your better than a lot of people on the site!
[ Reply ]
#32 Thanks man :) I appreciate it
[ Reply ]
The main problem with this is that it is way to busy, and it is hard to distinguish one image from another. There isn't really a focal point in the design, and that is one of the most important things of a box. Other than that, there is really nothing wrong with this. If you just get rid of a couple of pictures and clean it up a bit then it might be worth a favourite.
[ Reply ]
#34 I'm working on that now dude :) thanks for the advice
[ Reply ]
I think your backgrounds just being a mesh of images is a bit bland. I would have tried going for something more creative and not so busy. Your presentation is also kind of distracting from your box.
[ Reply ]
#36 Like I said in the previous comment, I'm working on it right now :) I'll update it when I'm finished
[ Reply ]