It's looking good, but there are issues with the makeup.
You mix the fontsize and the alignment too much. Left, right, centered... You don't care much about consistent spacing between text and screenshots.
As for the logo: I guess the other one, without any image in the back would be better, because you could make the title of the game bigger and more prominent. Right now it's smaller as the headline on the back and that's weird, since the title sure is something important!
While Im at it: I think you should remove a bit from the "green tone" on the backs background, to make it more fitting to the one on the front. And the blue Screenshot is WAY too small. It's rather useless that way.
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Pretty impressive for a first try dude, I like this quite a bit.
Game itself seems interesting too.
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#1 agreed, nice first box mate, and welcome to the site.
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Welcome, and I also agree that this is some good work.
Also, I'm interested in the game :)
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thanks guys, the game itself reminds me of Vagrant Story with a mix of Final Fantasy. I appreciate your faves. =D
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Damn. I love that back.
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haha it took me a long time to decide on that cause I didn't plan it out.
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nice job. I love it XD
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Excellent first box.
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@aelixus: Thanks a lot! even though there's limited sources for the game I still managed to pull it off. =D
@alldreamsfalldown: Thanks for the fave man, I'm looking forward to make a new one next week. xD
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Amazing! Excited for this game as well!
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Good job Aztreal! Keep up the good work
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My only complaint it that the reflection doesn't match up. Otherwise this is a fantastic first box. :)
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#12, I made the reflection like that so it's not always a boring straight reflection. I like things in an angle =D
thanks guys I really appreciate the faves and comments ^^
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Jesus Christ monkey balls! I look forward to your work. Faved & author faved.
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#14, thanks =D I'm waiting for a HoF before I make a new one =D
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Very nice. Especially for your first. I love that screen shot arrangement on the back.
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thanks, can't wait for this to go HoF so I can make a new box XD
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Why does it have to have HOF first?
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I'd like to keep it as a momento of my first HoF ^^ then im moving to my next project, which is Breath of Fire VI =D
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#19, Cool, can't wait to see it, and as a going away gift...
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Finally.
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It's looking good, but there are issues with the makeup.
You mix the fontsize and the alignment too much. Left, right, centered... You don't care much about consistent spacing between text and screenshots.
As for the logo: I guess the other one, without any image in the back would be better, because you could make the title of the game bigger and more prominent. Right now it's smaller as the headline on the back and that's weird, since the title sure is something important!
While Im at it: I think you should remove a bit from the "green tone" on the backs background, to make it more fitting to the one on the front. And the blue Screenshot is WAY too small. It's rather useless that way.
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OH! I just noticed the reflection of the back is wrong too ;)
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