Not only is it not very good design-wise (floating charrys, strange placement etc, I dont see how the box is anything like the one you are supposed to make it like. I mean, the logos in the same spot, but there is no reference to a comic book, the characters are VERY differently placed and the back has NO resemblence whatsoever. Therefore, I dont consider this going by the rules of the comp.
The back is too bad. The front is epically amazing, but the back is just kind of sad compared. I would recommend completely scrapping the back and starting over.
It looks like two different boxes. The front is relatively good, though I don't like the characters in the edges. The back however seemes extremely mal-placed. The red sticks out from the blue theme of the rest of the picture too much.
my entry for the Roaring Arts Competition
I'm supose to remake this box:http://vgboxart.com/view/15246/super.smash.bros.ds/?replies=7
Enjoy
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eh its ok, not your best
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I have to agree with MK91.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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Not only is it not very good design-wise (floating charrys, strange placement etc, I dont see how the box is anything like the one you are supposed to make it like. I mean, the logos in the same spot, but there is no reference to a comic book, the characters are VERY differently placed and the back has NO resemblence whatsoever. Therefore, I dont consider this going by the rules of the comp.
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Seems quite messy.
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#2, I disagree. It's not perfect, but it's actually pretty good.
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The back is too bad. The front is epically amazing, but the back is just kind of sad compared. I would recommend completely scrapping the back and starting over.
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It looks like two different boxes. The front is relatively good, though I don't like the characters in the edges. The back however seemes extremely mal-placed. The red sticks out from the blue theme of the rest of the picture too much.
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The black borders on the front ruin it. Use something more creative.
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maybe some more text on the back, nthe wi-fi logo goes above the Nintendo DS logo, and maybe some more information from the ESRB
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