Not bad, I would only say is to add a presentation to it, but other then that, its really nice. Also the back really doesnt have a design to it, try making your backs more organized, such as make the screenshots near there others such as in a line. Congrats on a second favorite ^^
Spelling error on the back, "Ever action" should be "Every action". Try adding a border to the screenshots as they seem to feel misplaced. The top screenshot also does not match the format of the bottom two, try to make those match.
This is my third box! Heavy Rain looks great, so I decided to make a box for it. Credit to deiviuxs for the template.
Just realized that I have a typo on the back..should say "Every," not "ever"
[ Reply ]
Not bad, I would only say is to add a presentation to it, but other then that, its really nice. Also the back really doesnt have a design to it, try making your backs more organized, such as make the screenshots near there others such as in a line. Congrats on a second favorite ^^
Edited at 1 decade ago
[ Reply ]
Spelling error on the back, "Ever action" should be "Every action". Try adding a border to the screenshots as they seem to feel misplaced. The top screenshot also does not match the format of the bottom two, try to make those match.
[ Reply ]
I like this but that font doesn't work at all.
[ Reply ]
Thanks for all of the comments and critique! I am currently re-doing the back of the box with a new font and image borders.
[ Reply ]
Version 2 changes: Different font on front and back. Spelling error fixed. New layout for the back.
[ Reply ]
Version 2=epic win.
[ Reply ]
I decided to completely re-design my Heavy Rain box because I was never happy with the first. Please view on full screen! Hope everyone likes it!
[ Reply ]