Sorry but this is a huge step back for you the front is just a background used commonly with renders over transparent copies. At least use the 3D effect, I made a tut if you use PS or GIMP link the temp should be white not grey even in real bundles temp is white with the box. The 3D glasses part is hard to see and notice
As for the back the temp cut off early, there are no screenshots and like Grand said the renders are floating, so it's just text and renders.
Sorry if it's long and/or harsh btw It kinda reminds me of my Mario Kart Online, we both use the same backgrounds for the same side and the back renders are almost the same.
#4, Then why make the box look like its meant to be 3D with the copies of the characters behind them?
And JS2K I completely agree with you. LaserSonic this isnt to be mean, but sometimes you have to be cruel to be kind. I'm not seeing anything else here than what I do on any other designs, yeah this is hi-res art but its been done so many times, try something original, use art that we've never seen before. Your boxes are just floating renders on a background. Also creating your own background could get you fav's and if you dont know how to do that go out and find some tutorials that will help you out. There's a WiP forum in the forums for a reason, try to use it.
Now onto the box, the disc on the top sticks out like a sore thumb and it looks awful. And that temp doesn't really give the design much justice either. And if your game is in 3D, why make the box so that the characters look like they're in 3D without using a proper tutorial. It looks a mess IMO because of the way youve just coied the renders and put them slightly behind each other with a different transparency. And thats just the front. The back has floating renders everywhere, they are so far from the background its as if they've take off and started flying and Mario looks placed in the middle of it all. Also there are no screen shots at all and the text is hard to read, and i mean very hard to read.
you should use that 3d effect and since i got 3d glasses i could see how it would look...lol
oh and i noticed that most of are of mario and sonic related games you should try making a box of something your not used to. If you can do that then you will get better.
Uhhhh....
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I've noticed that most of your boxes are just a bunch of renders floating in space.
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You know there is a tutorial on making a box 3D, so if you actually have some 3D glasses it'll stick out. It's in the forums somewhere.
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#3, No it's just the game's 3D, not the box
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Sorry but this is a huge step back for you the front is just a background used commonly with renders over transparent copies. At least use the 3D effect, I made a tut if you use PS or GIMP link the temp should be white not grey even in real bundles temp is white with the box. The 3D glasses part is hard to see and notice
As for the back the temp cut off early, there are no screenshots and like Grand said the renders are floating, so it's just text and renders.
Sorry if it's long and/or harsh btw It kinda reminds me of my Mario Kart Online, we both use the same backgrounds for the same side and the back renders are almost the same.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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#4, Then why make the box look like its meant to be 3D with the copies of the characters behind them?
And JS2K I completely agree with you. LaserSonic this isnt to be mean, but sometimes you have to be cruel to be kind. I'm not seeing anything else here than what I do on any other designs, yeah this is hi-res art but its been done so many times, try something original, use art that we've never seen before. Your boxes are just floating renders on a background. Also creating your own background could get you fav's and if you dont know how to do that go out and find some tutorials that will help you out. There's a WiP forum in the forums for a reason, try to use it.
Now onto the box, the disc on the top sticks out like a sore thumb and it looks awful. And that temp doesn't really give the design much justice either. And if your game is in 3D, why make the box so that the characters look like they're in 3D without using a proper tutorial. It looks a mess IMO because of the way youve just coied the renders and put them slightly behind each other with a different transparency. And thats just the front. The back has floating renders everywhere, they are so far from the background its as if they've take off and started flying and Mario looks placed in the middle of it all. Also there are no screen shots at all and the text is hard to read, and i mean very hard to read.
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you should use that 3d effect and since i got 3d glasses i could see how it would look...lol
oh and i noticed that most of are of mario and sonic related games you should try making a box of something your not used to. If you can do that then you will get better.
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Also, your box's reflection is off.
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The box's 3d template is badly done.
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How would Mario Kart work in 3-D...?
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#10, Use your imagination
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wow this is amazing ... as usual... also as usual ill fav and 5/5 and 8.9/10
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