My 2nd box ever, and I decide to do an Essence. Ambitious or foolish? I used many different texture effects for the front. In order to see the whole picture, you have to look at it full size. Please give me ANY contructive criticism to help me out!
I understand the composition, and the hard work shows. For a second box, it is of a very high grade,especially compared to my past.
The front has a nice design, but it seems a bit..stale and old. The blue doesn't work all that well with the black/white theme.. maybe add something like a starry background,and make the blue renders etc. black/white?
For the back, try something along the same lines, and maybe do something besides the a/b thing.[black/white] It doesn't fit with ''samus/aran'',because samus and aran aren't opposites.[although i dó get your idea,it just seems a bit odd]
My 2nd box ever, and I decide to do an Essence. Ambitious or foolish? I used many different texture effects for the front. In order to see the whole picture, you have to look at it full size. Please give me ANY contructive criticism to help me out!
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#1, it's really nice, i have been here 7 weeks myself and there are alot of people that will slash this, i am not one of them, i like it.
you just earned your first fav author.
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#2, thanks alot!
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I understand the composition, and the hard work shows. For a second box, it is of a very high grade,especially compared to my past.
The front has a nice design, but it seems a bit..stale and old. The blue doesn't work all that well with the black/white theme.. maybe add something like a starry background,and make the blue renders etc. black/white?
For the back, try something along the same lines, and maybe do something besides the a/b thing.[black/white] It doesn't fit with ''samus/aran'',because samus and aran aren't opposites.[although i dó get your idea,it just seems a bit odd]
I hope i could be of assistance.
Good luck!
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#4, yeah, I'll admit the back isn't quite as good as the front, and I'll def try to update with stars later on. Thanks alot for the advice!
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