#2, *facepalm*
have you ever heard of sarcasm? this box is awful! the logo isnt legible, the back is INCREDIBLY dull and boring, the whole box is choppy AND there is no DEV or ESRB logos! plus the front is just an edited brawl screenshot, try harder on your next one, but i can tell that you aint usin' paint because the box is skewed in position to match the template. which is a start, i guess.
#7, "It's my first box" isn't an excuse. People should have the ability to see that comparitively their box is sub-par, and NOT SUBMIT IT. Instead, work on it some until they come up with something that's worth presenting.
Since this is uploaded already anyway, though, we might as well give the kid some constructive criticism so that he can become better.
Typically, a black background with a plain image is a really bad idea for a cover. Look around you at professional covers, you'll never see a plain color background with a picture of a character. Take inspiration from official covers, see what they have to offer. See what makes them special and different than just "a picture."
Be really careful not to stretch your images too fat or thin. It looks horrible.
lastly, the text. Don't use MSpaint, look into downloading GIMP, or paint.net and look up tutorials for them.
Nice Box Man!
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thank you
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The Title looks weird
and it doesn't really look like Sonic
Because the Color
Oh First box very good for a new user
Edited at 1 decade ago
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It looks kind of out of order...
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#2, *facepalm*
have you ever heard of sarcasm? this box is awful! the logo isnt legible, the back is INCREDIBLY dull and boring, the whole box is choppy AND there is no DEV or ESRB logos! plus the front is just an edited brawl screenshot, try harder on your next one, but i can tell that you aint usin' paint because the box is skewed in position to match the template. which is a start, i guess.
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#5, Go easy it's his first box
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#5, Dude, Ever heard of first impression. It's his first box and he's probably thinking you're an asshole.
Box needs quite a lot of work and spypilot actually did a good job of covering some of the problems.......In a nice way (sarcasm).
At least you were able to skew. Good luck on your next box.
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#7, "It's my first box" isn't an excuse. People should have the ability to see that comparitively their box is sub-par, and NOT SUBMIT IT. Instead, work on it some until they come up with something that's worth presenting.
Since this is uploaded already anyway, though, we might as well give the kid some constructive criticism so that he can become better.
Typically, a black background with a plain image is a really bad idea for a cover. Look around you at professional covers, you'll never see a plain color background with a picture of a character. Take inspiration from official covers, see what they have to offer. See what makes them special and different than just "a picture."
Be really careful not to stretch your images too fat or thin. It looks horrible.
lastly, the text. Don't use MSpaint, look into downloading GIMP, or paint.net and look up tutorials for them.
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#8, i love you
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