Here is my gears of war 2 box. hope you enjoy it, there was soo many design ideas i had for this. but i went with this one. i will probably do a limited edition one soon.
The front is just a wallpaper, and the back is poorly designed. The blood splatters are random, the yellow on the tagline doesn't match, the text looks boring and is arranged in a boring manner, and it needs screenshots.
#3, The front isnt just a wallpaper. STFU! and the blood splatters are random? err ofcourse they were random its blood splatter FFS. and thanks for the comments halfswiss tleeart roza and firebrand.
Well it is quite good but some improvements need to be made.
I think the blood splatters should be a little darker and also try and make it look like Marcus is actually facing his locust enemy. I also would remove the yellow from the tagline. You've done a good job making it look original but it still needs a few improvements. Good job though :)
Here is my gears of war 2 box. hope you enjoy it, there was soo many design ideas i had for this. but i went with this one. i will probably do a limited edition one soon.
thanks faves and comments appreciated as always.
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You're one of the most underrated artists on the site IMO.
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The front is just a wallpaper, and the back is poorly designed. The blood splatters are random, the yellow on the tagline doesn't match, the text looks boring and is arranged in a boring manner, and it needs screenshots.
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I quite like it as a whole, but there are some nagging bits.
I think the text could have had some grit to it (on the tagline). Also, the blood splatters are too light.
I don't know how much editing went into the front, but it doesn't even seem that Marcus isn't looking at his opponent.
All in all, it's quite good, but those are a couple of gripes with the design.
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awesome!
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Dont like it, sorry.
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I love the back mate.
I think the front is a bit basic though.
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#3, The front isnt just a wallpaper. STFU! and the blood splatters are random? err ofcourse they were random its blood splatter FFS. and thanks for the comments halfswiss tleeart roza and firebrand.
and cmon i used to get like 20 comments before.
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Needs work.
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#6 and #9, those are not useful comments.
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Well it is quite good but some improvements need to be made.
I think the blood splatters should be a little darker and also try and make it look like Marcus is actually facing his locust enemy. I also would remove the yellow from the tagline. You've done a good job making it look original but it still needs a few improvements. Good job though :)
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#8, some graphics designer you are; you can't even take criticism.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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#12, im a graphic designer and production assistant to be exact, and when you comment with a deliberate attack. how can i take your comment to heart.
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Sorry to bump but #6, You never seem to give any advice as to how to improve.
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