[ Box updated on March 22nd, 2009 ] [ original ]
Super Mario Galaxy DS Box Cover Comments
Comment on Tucker1140's Super Mario Galaxy DS Box Art / Cover.
[ Box updated on March 22nd, 2009 ] [ original ]
Comment on Tucker1140's Super Mario Galaxy DS Box Art / Cover.
Alright, I found an idea for Super Mario Galaxy DS. It was the winner of the DS Cart Pack #1, so, I made it. Enjoy!
Credits:
Template: axel_master
Logo: Me
Background: Google Images
Renders: Google Images (but I rendered them!)
Screenshots: Google Images
Heres the logo so you can make your own BUT REMEMBER TO GIVE CREDIT TO ME!:http://vgboxart.com/forums/showthread.php?t=12852
Edited at 1 decade ago
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Awful, the logo's choppy, the temp looks kinda weird, the screens are just "there", the renders should to be visible, the Nintendo logo's black and white, it should be red, the back text is hard to read, that planet seems out of place, and the presentation is boring.
Delete it please.
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#2, First look at the full box, the Nintendo logo it's red and white (not black and white!). The choppiness was a glow for the outline. The planet isn't out of place! The text may be a little hard to read but the rest IS pretty good! Why should the renders be visible? Also how is the temp weird? Finally there's a black line separating the text and screenshots! Well, at least I still have good eye vision!
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Looks Awful 2/10
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Back isn't good (sharp corners on screens + no frames round them, text is misplaced and has a bad font, download gimp and make the mario on the back darker), front is good :) Your improving.
The only thing that's bothering me on the front is... i feel like the logo is not just well placed yet...
If you fix those things, or some of them, i'll give you my first fav on your boxes! :)
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#5, I made this with gimp!
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Sorry for double posting but #5, I updated it! Just the stupid back text won't seem to look good!
Edited at 1 decade ago
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... Try putting a darker background on the back so you can read the text well. I'm sorry to say that the font's still not what you see on a real box... I know from experience that backs aren't easy so I'll fav ;-)
PS: check your private messages and awnser pls ;-)
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Nice, I migt favorit it if you make the back visibel
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