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The World Ends With You box art cover
By avatar Optical 29 on December 27th, 2008
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Optical 29 [ 1 decade ago ]

Hey guys, I've been a member here for a while now, and I figured it's about time I post my first box. The World Ends With You. Credit goes to All Dreams Fall Down for the template. Full view is good.

Comments or suggestions?

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YoshiStar 46 [ 1 decade ago ]

Wow! Nice first box!! The back is amazing. The black and gray colors really work well.

I have some suggestions to improve it, though!

1) The front is a bit awkward. Neku's positioning and the logo positioning is great! The gray lines aren't very nice looking though. I suggest taking those off and instead adding other characters which are tilted with the same angle and smaller so it looks like there's depth.

2) Love the back. The layout is really really cool. Man, you're great at positioning and placing things. Just wish the text in the gray strips were rotated to fit right in the middle of the strips. Right now, the bottom strip text is a bit low.

Man, you're gonna be awesome. TWEWY was my first box too. :D

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aC.Sleet 25 [ 1 decade ago ]

Personally I think the front looks a bit empty.
I quite like the back.(I recommend changing how you wrote the title in your presentation.
One of the best first's I have seen.

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YoshiStar 46 [ 1 decade ago ]

#3, Hm, I think the front would be super classy and simple if he made the changes I suggested him to make.

But yeah, I agree, the TWEWY title you made does look kinda cool, but is a bit messy and hard to read. Plain White Arial Bold would look cool.

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ELCrazy 49 [ 1 decade ago ]

I agree with the critiques, but woah!

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paper sonic 37 [ 1 decade ago ]

you are awesome

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CengizMan 29 [ 1 decade ago ]

Some extra effects is what this box needs. First of all, I recommend to use a (blurry) city background forthe front. And make a background for the back which suits the BG of the front!

#8: His suggestion is also good. I dunno, Optical is the one who's gonna make v2 in the end. q:

Nice first! ;)

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aC.Sleet 25 [ 1 decade ago ]

#2, I started writing my comment before yours was up lol.. Anyways i agree with you 100%.
#7, I'm thinking Yoshi's suggestion would look better.

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CruSadEr 10 [ 1 decade ago ]

Nice job! I really like it. =)

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Optical 29 [ 1 decade ago ]

Wow, thanks for all the comments, guys. I'll look into the suggestions and see what I can do.

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DeathSpawn11 47 [ 1 decade ago ]

Very nice for a first.
Lovin' the back ^_^
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I look forward to more of your work.

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hsoldier 44 [ 1 decade ago ]

#11, I agree :D

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Ray Blade 40 [ 1 decade ago ]

It's not bad at all for a first, but I think the front is a tad bland. Still, this is heaps better than my first. Very respectable art here, looking forward to seeing more.

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Cerium 43 [ 1 decade ago ]

Koopa's made another alt? =P

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Optical 29 [ 1 decade ago ]

v2 is up! I totally revamped the front, kept the back, and changed my presentation.

Better?

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ravenrooney 32 [ 1 decade ago ]

Wow. My first box into the HOF was for this game...I think it should be your first as well. Just a fantastic first box. I'm impressed.

+fav

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Drakxxx 46 [ 1 decade ago ]

very creative and well done. If this is what your capable of, I'd love to see more of your designs!

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Optical 29 [ 1 decade ago ]

Wow, this is getting a lot more attention than I expected it to! Thanks for the favs, everyone!

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Dynamic 34 [ 1 decade ago ]

This is wonderful, a really great design and looks well thought out, very well executed. No real bad things I can say about it, I think you got this right :) Keep it up, I want to see more!

BTW, this so deserves a HOF.

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YoshiStar 46 [ 1 decade ago ]

#18, If its an awesome box, it'll get get awesome attention! This box is amazing. There's just a couple of things bothering me, but they won't really make too much of a difference.

1) I like the panel-style on the front cover. It looks comicy and completely matches the style of the game. The only thing I'm not liking as much is the circular panel Neku is in. Its so .. circular and uncomicy. I think some sort of quadrilateral would work much better.

2) In your presentation the text is like, touching the box. If you moved it a little up, the whole thing would feel a little more spacious and neat.

3) On the back, I wish the 'Can you pull it off?' text was centered in the gray strip. Also, I think it'd be good to add a period at the end of the 'to change the world' text, because whenever I read it, it always looks like '7 Days. To change the world can you pull it off?', which doesn't have much of a flow and doesn't really make sense gramatically.

EDIT: Nice template, btw. Heheh. ;)

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Optical 29 [ 1 decade ago ]

#20. On your first suggestion, I was actually thinking that same thing, but wasn't sure which looked better. I may update again just to see how that looks.

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CengizMan 29 [ 1 decade ago ]

First box in the HoF? I guess someone has made a alt account again! Just kidding, nice one. Keep them coming, Optical!

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YoshiStar 46 [ 1 decade ago ]

Congrats for HoF! =D

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Optical 29 [ 1 decade ago ]

Wow! A Hall of Fame...Thanks guys!

This is awesome! :)

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Dynamic 34 [ 1 decade ago ]

Congrats :)

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ravenrooney 32 [ 1 decade ago ]

Congratulations on the HoF! And on your first box! That's quite the accomplishment.

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Optical 29 [ 1 decade ago ]

Haha, thanks guys.

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Altair 29 [ 1 decade ago ]

Cool.

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City Tiger 9 [ 1 decade ago ]

good job! +fav

high five!

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