i deleted other one because i accidently put it in ps3 i am aware of spelling mistakes . discolouration of the nintendo logo and esrb is only supposed to look good its in black and white because i wanted to be orriginal
Appreciatin the effort! You could make it better, though. Like you said, the grammar and spelling mistakes on the back should be fixed. Maybe you can make it a little longer too?
"When Kirby accidentally swallows King Dedede's food, King Dedede's minions, letting their rage take control, go after Kirby! Kirby is forced to flee as almost everyone he encounters seeks to destroy him."
Like the idea of the black and white front, but it doesn't really go with the Kirby, Mario, or F-zero series (it could possibly work with the LoZ series) as they're pretty colorful.
Cool idea for the ESRB logo, but I think it'd look better re-invterted.
First off, nice box.
The rating TEEN for ESBR... Kirby isn't really... TEEN.
Underworld could be more in the spotlights and I don't like the text on the back, type it in another font and you'll become a much better box
i deleted other one because i accidently put it in ps3 i am aware of spelling mistakes . discolouration of the nintendo logo and esrb is only supposed to look good its in black and white because i wanted to be orriginal
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Appreciatin the effort! You could make it better, though. Like you said, the grammar and spelling mistakes on the back should be fixed. Maybe you can make it a little longer too?
"When Kirby accidentally swallows King Dedede's food, King Dedede's minions, letting their rage take control, go after Kirby! Kirby is forced to flee as almost everyone he encounters seeks to destroy him."
Like the idea of the black and white front, but it doesn't really go with the Kirby, Mario, or F-zero series (it could possibly work with the LoZ series) as they're pretty colorful.
Cool idea for the ESRB logo, but I think it'd look better re-invterted.
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First off, nice box.
The rating TEEN for ESBR... Kirby isn't really... TEEN.
Underworld could be more in the spotlights and I don't like the text on the back, type it in another font and you'll become a much better box
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#3 this kirby is okay
update
now i have zelda instead of cpt falcon
#2 i used your words hope thats okay
Edited at 1 decade ago
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