Hey everyone, I hope your Christmas goes well. I decided to make amother FFXIII box, I wanted it to look different from the others insted of the same thing over over again. I hope this is different for you. Credit to Sentry for the border, Elcrazy (I think) for the temp and XxdunexX for the synopsis. Comments & favs are welcome, Merry Christmas.
It's a good box, rough around the edges, but good concept.
I would say that you should be doing, is keeping a color scheme. Like for the back you have green and yellow, and for the most part it works except for the main character on the side that sticks out because she doesn't have either shade.
Next is uniformity. In the front, you can see clearly that two things stick out, because they're sharper than the image behind. Try to make everything as crisp as possible, and not mix blurry and sharp.
Those are my tips, hope it helps, but on the whole, +fave
Front is a bit to crowded for a Final Fantasy box, back could use a lot of work with the typography, design and such.
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Hey everyone, I hope your Christmas goes well. I decided to make amother FFXIII box, I wanted it to look different from the others insted of the same thing over over again. I hope this is different for you. Credit to Sentry for the border, Elcrazy (I think) for the temp and XxdunexX for the synopsis. Comments & favs are welcome, Merry Christmas.
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#1, Maybe so, but this is pretty nice. The front is especially good.
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#1, What can I do to fix these problems.
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#4, Ummm... fix the typography maybe? Pretty much common sense. =P
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#5, Should I use a different font or something else.
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LOL this is like your 70th Final Fantasy XIII box. It's not bad just theres nothing left for you to do with it.
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#6, Yes, use a different font as well as fix some formatting problems.
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Its nice, the front and back dont realty match but i still like.
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It's a good box, rough around the edges, but good concept.
I would say that you should be doing, is keeping a color scheme. Like for the back you have green and yellow, and for the most part it works except for the main character on the side that sticks out because she doesn't have either shade.
Next is uniformity. In the front, you can see clearly that two things stick out, because they're sharper than the image behind. Try to make everything as crisp as possible, and not mix blurry and sharp.
Those are my tips, hope it helps, but on the whole, +fave
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Updated, I fixed the text and I tryed to fix what FB said, hope this is better! :)
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Beautiful...much better! Especially the back, the color scheme looks great, and the text adds to it! Great job! :D
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I agree with Tlee, Also all the images are just a tad blurry, but i like the composition on the front.
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5/5. Awesome. I could never make that.
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