I would like normal screen shots. That half picture on the right doesn't make any sense, all I can see is what looks like a red arm?? Its to dark I think. Its not bad but its over done. Try being more original.
#6, Nothing special? Elaborate on things to do.
#7, Who cares?
#8, I'll think about that. Btw, that "red arm" is a robot :P
#9, Your meant to read it from the top and then bottom.
#10, ^^
Comeback? ;)
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dont like the temp, the tagline is too huge, and there's no screenshots :(
not one of your best
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#2, Screenshots? Erm.. they're on it ^o)
Template? Does it matter and what's wrong with it? It's a template for gods sake.
Tagline to huge? Cool typography anyone?
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#4, Okay.. that doesn't help...
..Tagline?
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Back needs visible screens :P, and make both fonts small sizes. The front's alright, nothing special. But not bad. 3/5
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Why did you rate it for cartoon violence?
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I would like normal screen shots. That half picture on the right doesn't make any sense, all I can see is what looks like a red arm?? Its to dark I think. Its not bad but its over done. Try being more original.
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I like it, but I reckon the tagline doesn't make a whole lot of sense.
They want a war, Give em We'll
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Agreed with Saxon. Nice idea. You could've flipped vertically "We'll" and "Give 'em". That would've been better.
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#6, Nothing special? Elaborate on things to do.
#7, Who cares?
#8, I'll think about that. Btw, that "red arm" is a robot :P
#9, Your meant to read it from the top and then bottom.
#10, ^^
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you do no halo will never cume out for ds
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but it is good
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#12, Some grammar tips. ds = DS. Capital letters. halo = Halo. cume = come. no = know.
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