Alright, cool concept, V (I'll just call you V, okay?)
Anyway, here's some tips. No need to put your synopsis text in a box, makes it look odd. I'd just make it a nice sans serif font (something like Comic Sans MS or the like), make it white with a darker stroke or use your Outer Glow effect on it set to Multiply and a dark color. Also, your tagline is kissing the edges of your back, try to reign that in some. On the subject of tagline, you used the incorrect "your", it should be "you're". For a background, I would use some sort of track and field type arena, look for some art from Mario and Sonic at the Olympic Games. Also, you only need to place the "4" Wii Remote logo up in the corner, not 1-4, and you might want to throw in Nunchuck or Classic controller (maybe not Classic).
On the front, looks pretty good. Logos are cut a little badly, but it is your first :). Also, I'd try and fit those bubbles with Mario completely on the front and maybe give the renders relating backgrounds. And lastly, if you didn't create that vector Mario, I would credit that. If you did, that's excellent.
Sorry I wrote you a novel, just want to give you a feel for what could make this idea even better.
I'm going to go ahead and fav this, because it's a hell of an effort for a first box, especially creating your own concept.
Yeah, you'll be a Rank 9 in about 2 months! Awesome for a first! I'll fav this, but... The wi-fi logo is to little and low, it should be about JUST at the corner and you only need to put 4 not 1-4! Good job for a first, 9/10!
well guys, this is my first box for the site. please give crit, and peace :)
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wow, to say the truth, for a first, i think this is fantastic
one tip for later on, you should use a background image, and maybe cut out the text, do some blending, yea
you got a fav from me
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awesome
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i agree with #2, and #3!!
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wow guys, thanx for the comments and favs!
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Alright, cool concept, V (I'll just call you V, okay?)
Anyway, here's some tips. No need to put your synopsis text in a box, makes it look odd. I'd just make it a nice sans serif font (something like Comic Sans MS or the like), make it white with a darker stroke or use your Outer Glow effect on it set to Multiply and a dark color. Also, your tagline is kissing the edges of your back, try to reign that in some. On the subject of tagline, you used the incorrect "your", it should be "you're". For a background, I would use some sort of track and field type arena, look for some art from Mario and Sonic at the Olympic Games. Also, you only need to place the "4" Wii Remote logo up in the corner, not 1-4, and you might want to throw in Nunchuck or Classic controller (maybe not Classic).
On the front, looks pretty good. Logos are cut a little badly, but it is your first :). Also, I'd try and fit those bubbles with Mario completely on the front and maybe give the renders relating backgrounds. And lastly, if you didn't create that vector Mario, I would credit that. If you did, that's excellent.
Sorry I wrote you a novel, just want to give you a feel for what could make this idea even better.
I'm going to go ahead and fav this, because it's a hell of an effort for a first box, especially creating your own concept.
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You fav my first boxs so i will fav yours
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#6, wow, thank you
all comments are welcome
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oh yea, i forgot to say, welcome to the site!
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yea dude, welcome to the site :)
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Yeah, you'll be a Rank 9 in about 2 months! Awesome for a first! I'll fav this, but... The wi-fi logo is to little and low, it should be about JUST at the corner and you only need to put 4 not 1-4! Good job for a first, 9/10!
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