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Tales of Symphonia: Dawn of the New World Box Cover Comments
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my third box
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not so good, the front is really plain, and if you look at the original's box it isn't that plain at all, also the background doesn't really fit on the back of it
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#2 I completely agree, it's very simple, and "The Sequel is Here" is just not a good choice of dialogue, i would've gone with "The Legend Continues," or "The Tale Continues." Also, where it says "Join Lloyd and the Gang," that is definitely not true, as Lloyd is your enemy in this game, and the picture of him smiling is definitely not good for the mood. I do think the idea of shadowing the characters is cool, but it would have been better if half of them was shadowed and half wasn't. I also have to mention that the dialogue and box are terribly cliche, work on that. Lastly, sequel is spelled wrong, and "Meet Two New Characters in this Adventure" is just not good dialogue at all for numerable reasons. You have the base of it, it's just not fluent, complex, original, or correct. Keep working on it.
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